Reviews for Alchemy and Ninjutsu
Guest chapter 4 . 10/29/2017
What is the pairing
Guest chapter 5 . 5/16/2014
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Rain of the Forest chapter 5 . 9/23/2012
Okay, too much author time, and not enough story time!
Rain of the Forest chapter 4 . 9/23/2012
ah... Ed is going to have a looooooooooooooooooong trip with them...
Rain of the Forest chapter 3 . 9/23/2012
Oh so you're short as well?
Rain of the Forest chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
OH geez, now I'm confused... Did Naruto see the truth for ninjutsu or alchemy?
Rain of the Forest chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Eh hem... MY story is called 'Fullmetal Jutstu"...
Vixen the Goddess Chevalier chapter 3 . 3/5/2012
Just thought I should let you know... Truth is a reflection of the person that stands before it. So for Ed, it looked like a white being with a flesh arm and leg. For Al it looked like his entire body. For Father, it looked like a small white ball. So for Naruto, it would be a white being that had whatever part of the body Naruto lost in the transmutation process... if he lost any. I'm not trying to flame you. I just thought you should know. I was confused at first when Mustang answered for Naruto before I figured out what he was talking about, so I thought it might confuse others as well.
animesmile147 chapter 5 . 8/3/2011
It's really good but Hinata should stutter more.
Awesome chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
I like the story, and it has a good beginning. But I think Hinata should stutter, and the fact that she's a bit OOC.
Tanpopo97 chapter 5 . 5/30/2011
New chapter new chapter! : )
StarKiss666 chapter 5 . 1/13/2011
I really like this story! Keep up the good work! Just in case i want you to know that if you make couples my vote is... Sakura/Ed! lol Can you imagine the weapons of evil they will make? OMG the temper! lol ) I wanna see everyones reaction when Sakura gets so pissed that she punches a crater in the earth! lol She is acting calm now but... lol I think Naruto should warn Ed not to piss her off and then he does! lol ) Update soon please! ) Oh, and i dare Sakura to kiss Ed...on the lips! )
Gonstika chapter 5 . 1/8/2011
Very very interested. I have always loved the concept of a FMA/Naruto crossover for years and I find some good ones on this site.

This story is quite good.
Aria Snow chapter 5 . 12/28/2010
XD Edward and his taboo words! Crazy boy. And funny lil' A/N there.
Heiryuu chapter 5 . 12/28/2010
Alright I will try to put this as nicely as possible. Overall good story plot, but your dialogue is poor at best try not to say said so much find new ways of saying said for instance "hn" said sasuke would sound better as either "hn" grunted sasuke or sasuke grunted in response. Also orichimaru should never snicker, chuckle is acceptable if only because snicker made me picture orichimaru in a kids book. Also humor is good don't let anyone tell you differently but to much and too corny are really bad. If you are creating pairings make sure that you don't do so blatantly. With some work this could be awesome but for now it's still coal and not a diamond.
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