|Reviews for Faceoff|
| RotRubin chapter 3 . 3/9/2011
Honestly I like how this one was written. It explains quite well how Luigi messed up Pavi's face (instead of leaving it omitted) and did a fresh version of it too
You kept them in character quite well, and I didn't see any mistakes Well done :3
| Umino Akiko chapter 3 . 11/23/2010
Oh my god! Pavi! *cries* I love you Pavi. *calls brute squad to beat up Luigi*
| Opalescent Pearls chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
Why does this story only have one review? It's really, really awesome! A very plausible and interesting way to explain why Pavi's real face is the way it is. (I think that's what you were going for, right?) Very nice. I like that Pavi is more comfortable speaking Italian. It makes the fact that he's the only Largo with an accent much less bizarre. You showed the relationships between Amber and Pavi and Luigi and Pavi really well. Well-written, thoughtful, lovely.
| ThouArtBenvolio chapter 3 . 3/25/2010
wow that was...intense!