Well that was one helluva good read, enjoyable how the story progressed and interactions between character was great only wish there was more.

Holy shit this was damn good story

Bro Naruto is the least interesting character he’s retarded arrogant selfish and weak

Naruto seems kinda lame at this point I wish you’d given fu the Jiongu and had Naruto have his Normal Konoha arc tbh

Eh. Hidan is more around B to A class. He's only considered S class due to his immortality. He's only got Kenjutsu.

Hashirama had all the Bijuu except Shukaku in his possession and handed them out to everyone else but I'll assume this wasn't revealed before it was written. I get wanting to make Taki mean something but them being created and immediately getting Kokuo only to lose it seems like a weird power wank just for the story. If they could get a Bijuu by themselves they'd be a major village to me if they could also get ninjas to be at least relative to the Sand or Mist (after the Civil War, the weakest during those times and Suna is always the weakest most of the time.)

If you have a stronger Futon jutsu then you can beat a Katon jutsu.

Lol. Chomei goes from a gentleman and one of the nicest Bijuu to now being a sexist asshole. Scale Powder is now Faux Dust Release (since I refuse to even entertain it being related to Particle Release) and Kurama got sealed by Hashirama instead of Mito doing it herself. Just decided to make all Bijuu evil, huh?

Of course she’d not have anything. She didn’t do anything.

She was just completely useless in helping her teammates and now acts high and mighty? Then earlier on she blamed Naruto and Haro for fighting when it was all Haro’s fault. How did she go from one of my favorite characters into a character who’s annoying me constantly?

Kyuubi no Kitsune not Kyuubi no Yoko, different stories

Gray? Weren’t his eyes revealed before his real name was?

Kyuubi no Kitsune not Kyuubi no Yoko. Also, no. All jinchuriki do not have a tell of their status like Naruto, only Kinkaku and Ginkaku had a tell like him. Bee has nothing, Blue B had nothing, Yugito had nothing, Gaara had nothing, Kushina and Mito had nothing, Utakata had nothing, Fu had nothing, Minato had nothing, Roshi and Han had nothing, Bunpuku had nothing, Yagura and Rin had nothing. Literally just three people with whisker markings because they practically bathed in Kurama’s chakra before leaving in with whisker marks (Naruto being within the former jinchuriki and Kinkaku and Ginkaku being within Kurama while eating his stomach… still no clue how that works since Kurama’s purely chakra.)

One of the best story I have read not gonna lie
I'll give it a well deserved 10/10
Bye :)

So why didn't kakazu rip out the eyes of the Uchiha? They can be put in someone else (they trade em' around like trading cards later on in the series)... Probably be worth a good amount of money to SOME village, somewhere (or just ransom them back to konoha)... Seems like something that kakazu would do.