|Reviews for Black Fingernails|
| Zeilyinn chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Me gusto mucho n_n
Nos vemos n_n
| PotatoSoupYum chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
(: that. rocked.
| I'll Eat Yourself chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I honestly think that thing at the top should have gone like this:
LuCarly: "I do not own Zelda."
Tetra: "You had BETTER not own me. I refuse to be anyone's slave!"
And actually, I found a reason to "gripe" about the start of this fic, just a little. The main thing is that the ship broke when it hit the dock. The problem here is that not only is the ship created to withstand more pressure than the dock because it not only needs to float (the dock's supports are buried deep in the sand under the water, but it also needs to be able to take the punishment dealt by moving at high speed across water, especially when it impacts waves going the opposite direction. This would mean the boat would destroy the dock, not the other way around. This is more evident by the fact that, due to the boat's size and shape, it would be more likely to slide on top of the dock if it didn't break it right off the bat. The other problem is that the boat technically wouldn't make it to the dock in the first place, because it would get beached on the sand under the water before that happened (it may not look like it, but boats extend pretty far below what you normally see while they are in the water). This is why you often see movies where characters leave a larger boat way out in the water and then use a rowboat to go the rest of the way: the rowboat only sinks into the water a few feet at most and is significantly easier to push off the sand than something that weighs a few tons and sinks meters under the surface. This is also why they docked at that cliff in the game instead of at the dock: the cliff was by a deeper part of the water, which was made more apparent by it extending over the deeper portion, putting it closer to the part of the water that was safe for the boat to dock. On top of that, it was at about the height of the ship itself, allowing for easy boarding.
Just some fun facts for ya. ;) Other than that, I loved this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
that is AWSOME
| Wavebreeze chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
This was adorable and funny and had great characters and all that jazz. I wish there were more TeLink stories like this (by that, I mean written well and are entertaining). Great work!
| Sealy7 chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Teehee, I liked your approach with this story. It was very cute! :)
| Shannonigens chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I like it tons! Seriously, I found nothing wrong with this story. Great job! :)
| PhoenixSong4232 chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
aww that was really cute and incredibly well written. Great work portraying Link's ever elusive personality. Keep up the awesome writing!
| Sexy Anime Turtle chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
lol this was cute in the end but funny keep it up
| Lazy Bones chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Okay. I hate leaving stupid reviews like this... but this is so adorable and there's nothing else I can say but: Cute! Again, sorry.
| nonameface chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
This is the exact way I portray Link in my head. Loved the story!
| buddy w chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Nice. I really liked it. I don't read a lot of TeLink stuff, but this caught my eye.
And I"m definitely glad you didn't state 'btw they are dating' in the first line. That would've definitely ruined it.
Great job. Keep writing.
| Funk-tastic chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
This is a GREAT story. It's hard to find well written TeLink, mostly because of characterization. Goo job!
| ThePhantomWolf chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Death comes swiftly if you dare Link, my pal! That was funny, yet nice ending at the same time.
| Ocean Starfly chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Haha, great job! Tetra's attitude is awesome. Keep up the good work. :3