Reviews for Forswear It Sight
rainbowrainingkitten chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I loved it. Everything was in character and so beautifully written. Absolutely amazing. Harry was so in character and his lines memorable. Wonderful!
rainbowrainingkitten chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I loved it. Everything was in character and so beautifully written. Absolutely amazing. Harry was so in character and his lines memorable. Wonderful!
Amnesia Completa chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Wow. Just, wow. It's an amazing story, especially the last paragraph. Great job.
iMissHP chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
First, I really think that your fic fits the prompt. I really like how you defined beauty with different moments of their life. Also, I think you choose good moments to show us what you wanted. It was nice to read, but in my opinion, some parts don't flowed. I don't know haw to explain it, since it's very subjective. Anyway, it's a pleasant fic, I enjoyed it. The title was a little easy in my opinion, but I liked your fic.

8,5/10
Penelope Fiction chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Hi there.

I enjoyed this fic. I am generally a Harry/Hermione fan (Don't kill me!), but I loved this one.

Spelling/Grammar: Perfecto.

Story: It flowed, and I loved Harry's maturing right before our eyes.

Characterization: Yep. Definitely. Harry was perfect. :)

Prompt: This is where you slipped up a little. The prompt was love at first sight...but I liked your idea of Harry not being able to fall in love at eleven when he first saw her, so it was prolonged.

Final Score: 8/10
xxx-angelin-xxx chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
You used the theme beautifully! you kept on mentioning it but it was not tiring, it was not bad, it was not even a little bit boring! It was great! I couldn't imagine a way for a story to fit this prompt better. 2 points for prompt.

Grammar was very good: 2 points.

Definitely Harry was in character. Exactly what JK would have him think about Ginny. 2 points.

Generally the story was not too small or to big, everything had a point here and it was easy and interesting to read. 2 points.

And finally it may wasn't the most original thing I've ever read but your idea of having Harry's thoughts of Ginny through the years was amazing. 2 points.

So you've got 10 from me... I may overdid it but I can't find any reason to take ponts off...
delete-the-girl chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I usually don't like Harry/Giiny it's just so cannon. But I really liked this one. This one was lovely. You did a good job.
Mary chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Absolutely fantastic! Excellent job!
JacksonFrost chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Aww, I love this. I love how Harry's views on beauty changes as he grows older and more mature. Very sweet :)
MissWes chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Aw! so sweet:)
AlexisJayde chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
I thought that the way you expressed Harry's emotions was really well done. His characterization was spot-on, and Ginny's mentions seemed true to her as well.

-Jayde,