|Reviews for PocaHina|
| in your dreams as well chapter 3 . 1/17/2011
... You HAVE to update
| NinjaJudai19 chapter 3 . 11/7/2010
Oh no their qunnq qet cauqht O.O
Plz update its really qood )
| deathangel00 chapter 3 . 8/21/2010
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update for me.
| ProjXPsyClone chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Getting really interesting!
There are some minor stuff here and there I thought you may want to know, heh:
- like the accidental lower case "i" [I]
- "Hinata if [you] want a kiss all you had to do was ask"
- and in situations such as "Daddy" Hinata squeaked.
you can add in the comma "Daddy[,]" Hinata squeaked.
I hope that helps you! I'm sorry I couldn't be of much help...that's all I could find for you.
but still...this is a really good fanfic...
I seriously can't wait for more!
I just can't help but wonder why they'll kill Sasuke if they found out that they're together?
Keep up the awesomeness!
| deathangel00 chapter 3 . 8/9/2010
yea! sasuke n hinata finally got together! looks like hinatas in trouble though. cant wait to read wat happens next! update soon plz!
| ProjXPsyClone chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
This is rather interesting!
Something about it.
Keep up the awesome work.
I wonder who Hinata's fiance is?
Naruto? Kiba? don't know, heh
| ProjXPsyClone chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
This is really interesting!
Hopefully it won't end exactly like Pocahontas...
| FlapJack Lover chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
I love this story please update!