Reviews for PocaHina
in your dreams as well chapter 3 . 1/17/2011
... You HAVE to update
NinjaJudai19 chapter 3 . 11/7/2010
Oh no their qunnq qet cauqht O.O

Plz update its really qood )
deathangel00 chapter 3 . 8/21/2010
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update for me.
ProjXPsyClone chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Getting really interesting!

There are some minor stuff here and there I thought you may want to know, heh:

**insert []**

- like the accidental lower case "i" [I]

- "Hinata if [you] want a kiss all you had to do was ask"

- and in situations such as "Daddy" Hinata squeaked.

you can add in the comma "Daddy[,]" Hinata squeaked.

I hope that helps you! I'm sorry I couldn't be of much help...that's all I could find for you.

but still...this is a really good fanfic...

I seriously can't wait for more!

I just can't help but wonder why they'll kill Sasuke if they found out that they're together?

Keep up the awesomeness!
deathangel00 chapter 3 . 8/9/2010
yea! sasuke n hinata finally got together! looks like hinatas in trouble though. cant wait to read wat happens next! update soon plz!
ProjXPsyClone chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
This is rather interesting!

Something about it.

Keep up the awesome work.

I wonder who Hinata's fiance is?

Naruto? Kiba? don't know, heh
ProjXPsyClone chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
How awesome!

This is really interesting!

Hopefully it won't end exactly like Pocahontas...
FlapJack Lover chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
I love this story please update!