dude, this si really good!

i love the plot theres just one thing i ask of.

LONGER CHAPTERS! PLEASE! XD

i cant wait to see what happens!

i think this story could become reall big if you dont give up hope XD!

update soon!

Oh, dude, I really love the plot you have for this. When I saw the title was 'Terminal' I thought like, a bus terminal. But this is actually really, really cool. ;P

WRITE MORE/LONGER CHAPTERS. gr.

"Hello Mr. Brofolofoskous," said the doctor when he entered the room, "What seems to be the problem?" - I laughed really hard at that. xP