Reviews for Still Waiting
Ella.Boo.Bella chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
not a fan of vanille. but this is very cute and a nice little drabble. nicely written.
thedreamer256 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
yesh! i do love this pairing alot and the GAME!(even though it's quite true, lightning was with hope more and some people have written them as a "romantic" couple, but i just can't imagine that. their relationship is more brother and sisterly like. it's...creepy when author's write them in a romantic relationship O.o) even though vanille is older than hope, it's still cute xD you wrote it pretty well, like after the game like, it's amazing :D good job! xDD

by the way, i think the term drabble would fit it more than a one-shot because drabbles are less than 1,000 words and one-shots are more than 1,000 words. but i think one-shots tell a story and drabbles are light and fun. hmm...ANYWAY awesome ending to them xD
mangacrazi chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
WAAAAAH Another sad reflection of the ending! I really want to cry now. Thanks for sharing this sweet fic~ ToT
WickedSong chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Short but still very sweet and conveys the emotions perfectly. The length doesn't matter when it is this good.
Nightfall Daybreak chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Beautiful...absolutely beautiful. I cried, reading this.

This is exactly how I imagined his feelings after discovering that Vanille had crystallized. Especially the sentence: "He waited for the day where he could once again be reunited with Vanille," as well as: "Hope knew this as well, but he still waited."

It makes so much sense that he'd wait for her even though he knew that she was gone's saddening.

I fell in love with this pairing ever since the beginning of Final Fantasy XI. I view it as a shame that there aren't more HopexVanille fanfictions.

Therefore, I commend you, good author, for writing this fanfiction. And for writing it WELL.

Keep writing! :D

worldreminiscence chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
aww sweet.. i loved it, hopexvanille is indeed cute! i totally agree with u, i love this pairing. Lightning is more for Noctis!XD(ok..i know, it's crossover..and impossible to happen-which sucks- But i still love those two together!) :]
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
This was so eloquent, well done~! XD I'm a hopeless-hahaha- romantic when it comes to Hope/Vanille!

Eoin chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
It was good hope you make more final fantasy xi fics and maybe a bit longer
beckii chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
we really need more fanficcage on this coupling! thank you for this little sampler, looking forward to anything else you wish to add to this tiny little fandom xD
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
moonie44foreternity chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Maybe a *tad* bit too short, but really nicely done!
Arklune chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Nicely done. :) This definitely feels like what could have been going through Hope's head. The only note I'll make is that you used 'loose' instead of 'loss' in the sentence "she helped him cope with the loose of his mother". Not a big deal though, I understood what it meant. :)

Keep up the great work!