|Reviews for NotHoneymoon|
| Scherherazade chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
As I was reading this I was confused by just what Mai was upset about. At first I thought it was because Zuko hadn't proposed to her yet. Then I dismissed it as different thoughts seemed to randomly float through her head. I only understood that my first conclusion was the right one at the very end. I'm not sure whether or not the confusion I felt was a good thing or bad. If our every thought could be read by someone else would it be perfectly coherent or would it be something of a jumbled mess? I have a feeling that the jumble is more accurate.
So to that end I think what you wrote gave us a realistic peak into Mai's head and stayed true to both characters.
| PenguinsAndRiddles chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
| gloomy maiko lover chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
this was good..you did a great job. xD
| areanna123 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
i am a total mai fan and i think you did awesome with her
| Kimjuni2 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
love it, great job,!