|Reviews for Falling Through Cracks|
| AreiaCannaid chapter 28 . 4/7
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! It was so amazing! I read through it in one sitting and stayed up all night and I am really satisfied with what you did! I loved all the characters, it felt so raw and so full of emotion. I really love the plot and it how the ending is just so...right how everything did not right itself and go back to the way it was before because it can't, but you can make it okay. And that is just how life is sometimes. I loved your OCs and how well the wove into the story and drove the plot. I really love how well the characterization was and how you made the world seem alive. While reading your fic I felt like I was actually watching a movie of it.
I and just really in awe of your writing and storytelling! Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece! If you ever end up writing a sequel I know I would love to read it.
| Dramamama5 chapter 28 . 4/19/2016
Oh my gosh that was good! Loved every chapter...kept the characters honest and true...but it's an open endin...with no sequal. That's like answering a question with a question...no good byes...no reaction...no follow up...no "hey, things are great, just back for a visit"...no "you've proved yourself, come back now" or unleashed fury...yeah...what's with that? Seriously though, great job.
| Dramamama5 chapter 3 . 4/18/2016
What? Callen do something "stupid"? Never...
| Dramamama5 chapter 2 . 4/18/2016
Well, ain't he just a jerk...poor Callen
| Dramamama5 chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
Oh wow. Good start...lol..."I liked that eardrum"...hahaha
| WolfsongDarkforest chapter 6 . 8/1/2015
Wouldn't Hetty have had access to these 'hard files' of Callen's? She's like, A) Callen's surrogate mom/guardian angel, and B) ruler of the world. She would have at least known about them- that's her job, after all.
| giococcinella chapter 28 . 2/16/2015
Awesome story, really well written...sequel really really nice. I just loved this Fic so much, thank you! Now I just hope for a sequel! You are gonna do it, right? Pleaseeee!
| 00-night-eyes-00 chapter 28 . 5/11/2014
| I Feel Possessed chapter 28 . 4/27/2014
Just re-read this story and found the epilogue. I still love this story - it is excellently written (the odd typo here and there). The darker plots, characters and scenarios very much appeal to my imagination. But despite that I am pleased to see that the epilogue shows a glimmer of hope for Callen; that he has not been abandoned by his team and whereas he may be a long way from being able to return, he can once again start working undercover on some shady types of black ops, where he can forget about being G Callen and the horror of his past that he has recently been forced to relive.
A sequel would be awesome - if not, then this still remains one of top 3 NCISLA, Callen-based fanfics!
| JaniceS chapter 28 . 3/6/2014
The ending of a good story is always sad; I wish they could go on forever. I hope there is a sequel; I know it would be equally as exciting. Thank you for sharing your talents with your faithful readers.
| onefour-one-98 chapter 28 . 3/5/2014
Spent 2-3 days reading your god-so-awesome-fiction.
It was dark, even worst x) but it was great. Almost like you knew it for having lived it, i mean the way you described all characters' feelings and all ! Didn't even found OOC :)
Anyway, it rocks !
| Hope06 chapter 28 . 2/26/2014
Awww Callen I want to give you a big hug
| Shaz1 chapter 28 . 2/25/2014
Lovely epilogue- perfect for the story, now just looking forward to a sequel... hint hint
| wotumba1 chapter 28 . 2/24/2014
that epilogue is a consolation to the fact that g can't come back to ncis.
let's hope he can do his job in russia
| F4llon chapter 28 . 2/24/2014
Good ending. Sounds like a sequel coming soon? Loved the banter between Callen and Sam. Nice touch.