Reviews for The First Day Of School
KuletXCore chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Please continue this on the NEW, UNIFIED section here:

ultimate mayhem chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
This is great. Please continue it
PreCureCRAZY chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Oy! Where is RIn-chan in this weird story?
WingedSmasher chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
I like this :D

fix some indentations and work on lengths and its great!