Reviews for The Detention Club
NinjahNeachy chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
I love thuus story! Seem extremely extremely interesting (see tht I see extremely twice)!

Update soon cus I really Luke the plot so far :3

~Neachy
Colorful-Crap chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
great! love it, really do XD please upload the next chapter soon * puppy dog eyes*
Shinsetsu13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
hm cool! yay please update soon!
amainage chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Really like how it's going, fic that is. Liked how Light is determined to prove them wrong and kept getting thrown off by L good looks lol and intelligence.
TheSlashBunny chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
So far, I like your style and the plot. I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go! I'll be watching for the next update!
EvangelineNoel chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
Gasp! I is waiting for the next chappy! I wuv it!
YelloWhale chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
WOw! :{0 (-heh, mustachio)

i love this, and i love your writing style TToTT

please keep going, take your time

~YelloWhale
Italiangurlinamessedupworld chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I like this story.

Keep writing,

Italy
shego1142 chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Insult: This story is extremely interesting! How Dare YOU?

It's okay, update when you like .. soon as u can... UPDATE ALREADY THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME SUSPENSE! ENSE ENSE ENSE.. lol

.. did that seem bipolar? hmm.. aw this story is so cute! 3
scared of needles chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
please update really soon ...

or ill bite you ...and a dog bite my arm

so i have to get an anti-tetenus injection...
Atreyl chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
This sounds interesting. Write another chapter soon. :D
i.Jinx chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
This story is *dramatic music*...AWESOME!

I love this story

and it's okay if you update slow

I don't update fast either ;p

~Keep writing~

JinX
fragottini chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Ha ha! So cute! You said that I shouldn't rush you, right? But please... The story's too cute for it to be on hang for awhile...

Ha ha ha! Nice! You used Tsugumi and Takeshi as their teachers! WOw... Tsugumi's got issue's... And well, Light's total PMS-ing on Tuesday serves it right! I'll review again on the next chapter!
Pheeeeeb chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Hello. :)

Just wanted to say that I really like this and can't wait to read more. I always enjoy high school AUs, and this one's definitely got me interested. :)

I'd love to read more soon, but obviously you have other things to do as well as write! I totally understand where you're coming from regarding last year of high school; sometimes the workload's a total nightmare!

Keep up the good work! :)
saintpeter chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
It's perfect. Absolutely perfect. I love fics where people meet for the first time and the make the reader see the characters from a fresh point of view, as if you've never even heard of them before. I really felt like I was reading an original.

Your writing is very balanced, clear and the kind that makes you wanna read every single word. As to characterizations... I'm usually not that enthusiastic about people making Light a "good" person, but I don't mind it when he's written as well as this. I loved your L, his speech pattern and his persona in general are easy to get wrong but you nailed him, I think. Mello and Matt - my faves in DN - seem promising, too. It's always nice when they're a Fred/George kind of duo. :D

I was quite surprised that they all live on the same street. Well, it's convenient for the story and also very cozy.

I wonder how the plot will roll from here onwards... For some reason I keep thinking there's going to be a mystery to solve, I guess because the setting is reminds me of a reversed Famous Five situation. :)

But yeah. I'm lovin' this so far. Take your time writing, I know perfectly well how long it can take.

PS I think we're all trying to stop reading/writing ff so much... :) It's a bloodu hard addiction to break, though. *sigh*