Reviews for The Detention Club |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love thuus story! Seem extremely extremely interesting (see tht I see extremely twice)! Update soon cus I really Luke the plot so far :3 ~Neachy |
![]() ![]() ![]() great! love it, really do XD please upload the next chapter soon * puppy dog eyes* |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm cool! yay please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really like how it's going, fic that is. Liked how Light is determined to prove them wrong and kept getting thrown off by L good looks lol and intelligence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, I like your style and the plot. I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go! I'll be watching for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gasp! I is waiting for the next chappy! I wuv it! |
![]() ![]() WOw! :{0 (-heh, mustachio) i love this, and i love your writing style TToTT please keep going, take your time ~YelloWhale |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. Keep writing, Italy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Insult: This story is extremely interesting! How Dare YOU? It's okay, update when you like .. soon as u can... UPDATE ALREADY THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME SUSPENSE! ENSE ENSE ENSE.. lol .. did that seem bipolar? hmm.. aw this story is so cute! 3 |
![]() ![]() please update really soon ... or ill bite you ...and a dog bite my arm so i have to get an anti-tetenus injection... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds interesting. Write another chapter soon. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is *dramatic music*...AWESOME! I love this story and it's okay if you update slow I don't update fast either ;p ~Keep writing~ JinX |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha! So cute! You said that I shouldn't rush you, right? But please... The story's too cute for it to be on hang for awhile... Ha ha ha! Nice! You used Tsugumi and Takeshi as their teachers! WOw... Tsugumi's got issue's... And well, Light's total PMS-ing on Tuesday serves it right! I'll review again on the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Hello. :) Just wanted to say that I really like this and can't wait to read more. I always enjoy high school AUs, and this one's definitely got me interested. :) I'd love to read more soon, but obviously you have other things to do as well as write! I totally understand where you're coming from regarding last year of high school; sometimes the workload's a total nightmare! Keep up the good work! :) |
![]() ![]() It's perfect. Absolutely perfect. I love fics where people meet for the first time and the make the reader see the characters from a fresh point of view, as if you've never even heard of them before. I really felt like I was reading an original. Your writing is very balanced, clear and the kind that makes you wanna read every single word. As to characterizations... I'm usually not that enthusiastic about people making Light a "good" person, but I don't mind it when he's written as well as this. I loved your L, his speech pattern and his persona in general are easy to get wrong but you nailed him, I think. Mello and Matt - my faves in DN - seem promising, too. It's always nice when they're a Fred/George kind of duo. :D I was quite surprised that they all live on the same street. Well, it's convenient for the story and also very cozy. I wonder how the plot will roll from here onwards... For some reason I keep thinking there's going to be a mystery to solve, I guess because the setting is reminds me of a reversed Famous Five situation. :) But yeah. I'm lovin' this so far. Take your time writing, I know perfectly well how long it can take. PS I think we're all trying to stop reading/writing ff so much... :) It's a bloodu hard addiction to break, though. *sigh* |