|Reviews for The Last Dance|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
THIS IS ONE OF THE SWEETEST ADORABLE PAIR FIC THAT I HAVE READ! 3 :D
I really LOVE it! Thank you for sharing it Mitsukai-san! 3
| superhappy chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Very nice Adorable pair fic. I feel lame for just discovering YOU,this PoT pairing genius, now. I shall go give myself onethousand laps now as punishment.
No,but in all actuality this was a well done fic and it makes me want to read more of your fics.
| cherrygeri chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
OH MY GOSH 333 i don't even care if it's been a year since you wrote this, my friend linked me to your fics since she really likes your Alpha ones and i was super happy when i found this Adorable Pair one :D
BUT OH MY GOSH THIS FIC WAS SO CUTE! O you got Atobe down rather well for a first time fic, and Jirou as well 3 also the public confession bit made me squeeeeeee so much XD
i hope you write more Adorable Pair in the future, I love how you write them O also my friend said you included them in one of your other fics, i'll definitely be reading that one soon hehe.
| nochillbunny chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
seriously, can i consider myself as your fan? this is like one of the best adorable pair fluff ive ever read.
| TQWEE chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
YAY! Adorable pair love! This was awesome. So sweet and Atobe was perfectly fine.
Congrats for graduating! And for the fic to celebrate[Jirou!]
| ice flow chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
OMFG, KYA! -fangirls like crazy- XDDXDDXDDXDDXDD You have the official approval of the most rabid atoji fangirl out there. ) XDD You should write more Adorable. They're just too cute to pass up. and Atobe's such a fun character to write...especially with Jirou in the mix~ XDDXDDXDD
| denizen of the night chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
It was sweet but it lacks the adorable pair charm... There are also subtle changes in the pov and I had to reread the sentence to make sure whose pov was it... I liked Atobe's confession though (but I still think he should do it in a grander fashion... spotlights?) and the last dance idea was really sweet... All in all, it was good for a first time AtoJi fic... Do your best on the next ones!
| sxt chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I LOVE IT! 3 is this going to be multi-chaptered?
| Purple.Chocolate.Stars chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Do you know how much the rest of the yaoi community will bug at you to write more Adorable now? (Alpha forever :D) This was AMAZING. Do you have a girlfriend? Because I think you can get easily get anyone you'd want if they read your writing. I don't know why you'd ever think anyone would FLAME you. I'm not even that huge of a fan of Adorable, but...maybe you've converted me. You have awesome prowess like that ;D Yeah? Yeah? Lame joke..? Okay...XD
| xSadistxFujix chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Flame you? FLAME you? Why would we FLAME you? This was absolutely *ADORABLE*! –squeals- But yes, when writing adorable, be afraid be very afraid because we are probably some of the most die-hard fans you’ll ever meet. –smiles- But the fact that it’s Adorable pair, makes it good and then the fact that it is VERY well written and very *ADORABLE* makes it even better! If Keira hasn’t read this yet, she’ll love it (she’s the biggest Adorable fan in the world –nods-). It was cute, fluffy, adorable, and that just spells AtoJi. –nods- And I loved it!
| mooglestookmyheart chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
| YaoiIsLove chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
You know i'm a diehard fan so i just have to scream...KAWAII! OMG THAT WAS SO UTTERLY CUTE! I AM DYING RIGHT NOW! Oww...i have a cavity. YOU gave me a cavity. Loved this...wonderful. Ja...