|Reviews for The Marriage Contracts Redux|
| missgsmith51 chapter 5 . 12h
Excellent! I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Of course, Harry and Daphne are one of my favorite pairings, and I have always believed Neville would have made a much better friend to Harry. Neville is a truly good person who actually understood some of what Harry had suffered and didn't begrudge him the few good things that came his way.
Ron and Ginny escaped rather easily, IMHO. Both of them were complete stinkers, and I'm surprised Harry let Ron live after the way he treated Hermione. His treatment of her didn't seem far-fetched at all, either, given the sentiments Ron expressed in GoF.
I love the way Harry and Neville toyed with Dumbledore's nosinessover how they'd defeated Voldy. It's a good thing they didn't give him the real story; he probably would have said it was an improper defeat and resurrected Voldy again in order to make the battle conform to his personal vision of things. This Dumbledore was probably more dangerous than some of the truly evil versions, because this one had managed to convince himself that he was doing what was right ... what was best for all. **shudder** He certainly left a path of destruction in his wake. I wonder if he ever regretted the deaths he caused. Remus's fate was particularly sad, IMO, although I can't really fault Harry for cutting him off. But it sounds as if DumDum didn't really bother much about him after ruining his life.
The closing chapter was amusing. I think Harry and Neville treated DumDum's grave with all the respect it deserved. I loved Tom's fate. Perfect! Thanks for a fun read.
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/25
Great. Thank you
| Tomon chapter 5 . 4/27
Well, now I'm not sure if Daphne was raped or not. You changed again one sentence so it seems like she in fact wasn't and it would come only after their wedding. But then the scene with her in Harry bad remained unchanged and while this was a horrid experience if she only expected it to happen it shouldn't be that bad to really justify the mentioned scene...
So I guess I'm glad for Daphne if I'm correct. Also nice that Ginny was not that BIG of a bitch and that Hermione may in fact have a nice ending with Justin :)
| Tomon chapter 4 . 4/27
So she was raped after all? :( I hoped that she managed to avoid this fate in the rework since you didn't mentioned the night visit or potion but seems like you just didn't make it so obvious.
Or was "All this fuss over girl? Lays like dead fish anyway." just a trash talk/insult to Harry? Dare I hope?
| Tomon chapter 3 . 4/27
Heh, "That's the second time she's called me 'Pauper'" in this story isn't true. She never called him that when they Molly decided to withdraw the contract. Also we are not sure if she really slept with someone because the only things pointing at that was Harry insult that might just well be a revenge for what Molly said :)
Otherwise nice rewrite even if so far I found only one really added part :)
| FotoDi chapter 5 . 4/26
What happened to the Dursleys ...
Other than a long, slow revenge?
| Avalonemyst chapter 5 . 3/23
:) I enjoyed this story very much.
| kanazak chapter 5 . 3/21
Haha, nice touch with the humping aardvarks. XD Just recently read the story where that idea was started.
| CMVreud chapter 5 . 3/5
Awesome story, awesome end.
| CMVreud chapter 4 . 3/5
Soothing balm for a troubled heart.
| thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 2/28
your chapters are freakishly long, but their quality is top notch!
| Pcano94 chapter 5 . 1/31
Great job on your story!
I would like to thank you very much for taking the time to think, write, edit and upload this story. It was an enjoyable ride!
There was nothing to dislike of this story. Everything flowed properly, characters were mostly 'in-character', Harry's interactions with Daphne were short, sweet and down to the point. I enjoyed them.
As of yet, this is one of the best Harry/Daphne stories I have read and certainly one of the best 100k word stories out there. Congratulations!
Keep up the great writing!
| Demiser of D chapter 4 . 1/22
Pretty sure I've already reviewed this once, but read it again recently and it was just as great as the first time, so hey, have another! You give us mediocre fanfic writers something to aspire towards.
My only real critique is that the explanation of what happened to Voldemort was a bit incomplete feeling. I mean, we get that he was beaten, and what happened to him AFTER he was beaten, but just putting a bit more emphasis on HOW he was beaten(even if it were just via skill and determination) would have made the ending a little bit less confusing.
Not sure how you'd do that, but then again, I'm not the awesome writer here.
Have a nice weekend.
| Fast Frank chapter 1 . 1/16
Ordinarily, I would say, "spoor' not 'spore", but with Snorkacks , who knows?
| Kane Richards chapter 3 . 1/9
Enjoying the story profoundly
And as for how you handled Tom... well played... well played