Reviews for Erised
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
This poem stays true to what the Mirror of Erised is and its purpose. You did well capturing the Mirror of Erised, especially since I could feel its pull as I read this poem. I think I know what my heart's desire is, but I'll keep that to myself.

Still, you handled this poem nicely. Good work.

-Aria Breuer
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GreenEyedRedHead1994 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
This was SO good! I love the world of Harry Potter! I don't like Harry all that much but...
iMissHP chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Nice poem! I like it.
meltedhappiness chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
This is pretty good, a poem I'd never think of writing. I was waiting the whole poem to see the word desire somewhere, thankfully it was the last word of the last sentence of the last stanza. Great job!