Reviews for The Pirate and the King
Riku-The-Nickell chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Hi there,

I have seen that this story is at least about one year old but I had to write a short review! One reason, of course, is the couple you chose. ;D

I really like your style. It is easy to read and you displayed the two characters perfectly in my opinion! The strong Seth on the outside, but soft in he inside. And Tolten's decision to "not let her down"... this scene was sooo cute! ;D

I also liked that you did not write the story too corny.

Besides, I like your alternativ plot more than the end of the game. xD It is so sad that Seth sacrified herself for the others. _

All in all, you wrote a very good story here!

Go on like this! )


Cross the Sky chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
That was absolutely lovely! :D
Lord 0f Storms chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
This is beautiful! I'm so glad there's some Tolten/Seth love in this story - it's such a neglected pairing! Anyway, I love how this is written, they're both very much in character and I can easily see this happening post-game (after Seth's dramatic return, of course XD). I love that Seth is both gentle towards him, and yells at him, it's so true to her character. Excellent!