|Reviews for Leah's Changes|
| Wolfgirl007 chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR! I love it lol and can't stop reading! Awesome!
| Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I love all the symbolism used here! Excellent writing!
| amsftwilight chapter 15 . 8/10/2012
awww this story was so well written and well thought out i enjoyed reading it. The ending was very complete in tying up loose ends, great story all around.
| nakala chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
this wow i really like it
the writing is so mature and professional for a lack of a better term the is beautifully written and the story is so much different from any other leah story i have read and i can tell that just by reading the first chapter
| BELAVERA chapter 15 . 8/10/2011
That was wonderful, especially the parts about Rose running to the baseball field to "save" Emmitt! It is "too bad" that she ran overboard with her mouth & got a good taste of mud, but after she calmed down it seemed to do her a lot of good! I know that some may miss the drama when Leah used to let loose on the wolf pack, but personally-I loved the fact that she calmed down & thought of better things. I like for everyone to get along & as each found peace in contributing their minds & abilities, that would be a sequel I would love to read!
| LoveThunder chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I loved the way the story flows, the idea's about Kyle phasing into different animals is different, and i liked the way she got over Sam so easily. The otter bit was too cute too, in a good way. Hoping for a sequal to do with the two kids?
| conleyswifey chapter 15 . 12/22/2010
this was a good story. I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work and i may have to check out some more of the stories you've written!
| conleyswifey chapter 9 . 12/20/2010
another great chapter and i enjoyed Rosalie getting covered in mud. ( I never did care for her)
| conleyswifey chapter 7 . 12/20/2010
awww... he loves her so much.. that much was made very very clear in this chapter
| conleyswifey chapter 2 . 12/19/2010
i like kyle. he has an innocence about him but at the same time he's clearly a man. I hope that Leah does not resist him for too long!
| Rudyji chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
wow, seriously, that's some great writing...it flows effortlessly
nice syntax and sentence building..feels like a real book to me..even better than some real authors too
Also, the story is captivating. ty
| Domenique chapter 4 . 10/13/2010
Usually im not such a slow reader…but I have been hectic buzy. So firstly I almost got a heart attack when lea sead yes to marry him…things will be getting interesting, I still admire the way you make the different way they shift seem so natural. My favorite part in this chapter was the playful action on the bed…and I had to laugh at them sleeping as animals just to keep their hands of each other…This was a very “clingy” love chapter usually I don’t enjoy stories that’s all about love and being in love for such a long period. But I am looking forward to the meeting with the family and some action….But great work I noted you added at the bottom that you will be posting a darker story at some point,I will have a look at it once this one is done
Have a lovely day onwards
| Domenique chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
Because of the long chapters ,I have a lot to say..hehe.I believe a good story deserves a review, There’s so many different qualities to your writing style I admire, one of them is the way you master to make me feel captured in this nature scenes. I know your story’s main aim is not only on t shape shifters and more about lea as a character,but you are balancing the supernatural side again I feal things are moving fast its only the second chapter and she already loves him,but I do understand you explained why things are moving fast.
As to the lea as an eagle I loved it,this is the first story I have came across that uses the shape shifting as you do.
Im so0o0 glad you had lea stand up for herself at the end,but I adore them as a couple,he sounds perfect in his own way.
I cant wait for them to come across a vamp together,and hopefully re-unite at some point with some of the other characters we love…
Have a lovely day
| Domenique chapter 2 . 10/6/2010
So im in love with your shape shifter you created he sounds super hot,I love the idea that he can change in to any animal, and the general way the story was written is lovely, great writing style, however I do feel that to much was given away in this chapter .There should have been a bit more mystery and I feel as if lea would never really just warm up that fast to someone, but I am so glad you mentioned that she is over Sam because it makes me happy to see her grow as a character, I honestly don’t know what to except from the rest of the story but im very excited to read.I will try to review each chapter and as soon as I get some time I will take a look at the other story’s. Im suppose to be writing myself,but these days im just discovering good stuff …so my pen is taking a rest hehe
Thanks for the review reply,I love to hear from the writers who’s storys I enjoy.
Kisses all the way from south Africa
| Domenique chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
I have been searching for a story like this for such a long time, not many writers master the whole wolf/in nature thing.I adore the way you write,and I love the long chapters( I can tell there went a lot of hard work in).Lea is one of my favorite characters especially since I started reading red eye and the she wolf. You guys are treating her character well.
It started out pretty typical as most people usually bring in the depressing sam/em story. But you surprised me with so many things like the detailed manner you described her outfit,and the way you managed to paint such a beautiful picture of the wedding. I loved it*
As for the wolf action that’s what got me hooked, and I LOVE the idea of her meeting new wolfs, and I laughed out loud at the statement of she won’t mate in wolf form…is lemons like that even legal ? hehe I cant wait to see lea find some happiness as much as im enjoying being in nature in the mind of our she wolf I can’t wait for her to interact with sum characters.
Great job,you are a natural writer.