Reviews for Ordinary
Pancakes.On.A.Rainy.Day chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
I really liked this! it was really deep and I love your writing style in this - it conveys very successfully that it is Caitlyn's tangled thoughts. :) I really liked the lyrics! They fit so well into the fic, and kinda sums up all that's on Caitlyn's mind. I like how it was mainly what was going on in her mind, but still you had actions and I knew where she was and what she was doing. Fics where it's only tangled thoughts can get a bit confusing and I think they can be a bit 'hard' to read sometimes..I actually like how you kept it gloomy and not made a happy ending.. it was very original and realistic! :)

Great job!

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