Reviews for The Black Fox
ShadowKing50 chapter 92 . 10/15
I am not sure if anyone that had reread this story said this in a review, but you seem to have done the Kaguya thing first with Rhyu and Kuya. I wonder what the battles in this war would have been like if it wasn't for the fact that you brought in the two Gods of Flames.
Roku chapter 16 . 9/11
You know, the story is good and all but some things really just crack me up.

Mangeky┼Ź became Mango
Madara became Mandra

Just a little bit of editing and this would be great.
Guest chapter 100 . 8/27
This is the best thing I have read in a long time. Thank you for righting such a awesome piece of work.
hi chapter 1 . 8/16
Blossom-in-Bloom chapter 10 . 8/1
You could really use a beta. The story is riddled with misspellings and grammar errors. It makes it almost impossible to read and enjoy..
Turtlesarecoolswag chapter 8 . 6/25
kek isis
Guest chapter 100 . 6/22
Just finished reading this story. One of the best I've ever read.
stardust953 chapter 1 . 6/21
It's fun seeing Naruto acts cold towards his former teammates and the way he acts, he tends to act more like Sasuke
aReader chapter 1 . 6/16
some typos in the first chapter...
Guest chapter 100 . 5/18
So cute~~~!

Also can you please do this idea for your story if you want more ideas please

Why is everyone disappearing at night and why are people screaming demons and why are people who disappear come back but half humans and half animals and trying to turned everyone into demons.

Narusaku -foxes
Sasuke x Angel (OC) -crows
Shikatema -mountain lions
Nejiten -wolves
Lee x Karin -cheetah
Kakashianko -wolves

Side/main characters:
Kabuto-snake .

What there they look like now:(there human still just with ears or tail or wings,snake tail)

Sakura uzumaki:Sakura hair has grown to her waist and has sharp claws with sharp teeth she also a pink fox ears on top off her head and she has 10 pink tails. Also she has slits eyes and soon to to be mate to naruto and she has 3 kids on the go (2 girls 1 boy .)

Naruto Uzumaki:naruto still looks the same but the only difference is that he has fox ears on he's head and 12 tails with sharp claws and teeth with slits eyes and is soon to be mated to Sakura .

Sasuke:sasuke still looks the same but he ears are now long and pointed and he's has too big black wings on he's back.

Angel:Angel is a slim woman with big breast and has long wavey silver hair and dark red eyes and she wears a black kimono dress with black sandals and last of all she has too long pointy ears and big long white wings also she has special eyes that can control wind like garra can control sand and is going to have a son soon.

Kiba:kiba has brown ears with 5 long furry tails and he has sharp claws and teeth who's gonna have twins soon with hinata (boy and girl).

Hinata: hinata has dark blue ears with 6 long furry tails also she has sharp claws and teeth and soon to have twins soon.

Shikamaru:he's going to have lion ears on his head he also .Has 8 long straight tail also sharp claws and teeth.

Temari:she going to has too lion ears on her head and a long 7 straight tail also sharp claws and teeth (son)

Neji:brown fur wolf ears on his head and long 9 furry tails and sharp claws and teeth also is gonna have a daughter with tenten in the future .

Tenten:light brown wolf ears on her head and long 8 furry tails sharp claws and teeth also having a daughter soon.

Lee:dark black ears with green spots also has cheetah ears and 4 long tails sharp claws and teeth going to a son soon.

Karin:red ears with purple spots also has cheetah ears and 5 long tail with sharp claws and teeth.

Kakashi:silver ears with no mask because it was ripped when kakashi was changing also has long furry 11 tails and sharp claws and teeth also going to have a daughter soon.

Anko:purple ears with long 9 tails and sharp claws and teeth. Also going to have a daughter soon

Narusaku kids:

Hero uzumaki is 14 years old and has minato personality other say but the only difference is that Hero has red spikey hair dark blue eyes and has he's mum forehead he's outfit is a simple yellow suit of clothing with orange trimmings and a hood also a black mesh under-armour also black he has red fox ears and 6 fox tails And he's element is wind and earth

Suvia uzumaki is 13 years old and has a mixture of naruto and Sakura personality other say she more like Sakura of her monster strength but she does look like kushina and Sakura , the body of Sakura when she was 12 years old but red hair hair and silver blue eyes from kushina And her outfit is a sleeveless white kimono with a black trimmer at the waistband and has brown sandals also she has red ears and 6 tails also her element is water and earth

Lizzy uzumaki is a 7 years old girl she has long blond hair that's put in a ponytail and green eyes she's a lot like naruto but female and yes she the only one who has whiskers . And she has blonde ears and 4 tails and her outfit is a yellow kimono and a black simple suit and with
Black sandals .

(If you want you can do the rest of the kids )
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5
when Naruto kill off the akatsuiki meber he sand him to the dather god for some time to let garre go and Naruto and his fox patherd was going out too.
Pryryan18 chapter 2 . 4/11
Some of the words are mispelled in this fanfiction
romeosami7 chapter 3 . 3/24
3rd chapter: because you love her.. ewwwwwww
YeagerMeister31 chapter 100 . 2/4
well that was one hell of a story the ending was sad Sakura been the oldest and last to die shame Sasgay's kid became Hokage that was a joke if there ever was one
YeagerMeister31 chapter 99 . 2/4
well this chapter was quite amusing and adorable
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