|Reviews for Every Cloud|
| orionastro chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
great continuation of this beautifull story
| Jonniebuk chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Great. The story worked really well and moved at a fast pace. Loved the twist in that Jamie's injuries were mainly due to the fall downstairs.
Nice touches of humour as well, that had me laughing out loud.
Just one comment - The paragraph describing Trevor's appearance goes to the trouble of creating an air of mystery and malevolence "Dressed completely in black, with a hood covering the head," which is then almost dispelled by revealing that it's Trevor. Almost seemed as if you'd changed your mind half way through on how the story was to continue.
Anyway onto part 3 and then to bed!
| Peya Luna chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
dont know what his problem is, the biggest organ is of course the skin ;-) i must say, with this stop-and-go tale of what happened to jamie you had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, with about half a dozen scenarios in mind - good work! btw, i just noticed the publishing date, isnt it a nice coincidence that you put this up just as i was looking for fics? now i have good stuff to read and you got your first reviews - lucky us, hu?