Reviews for Axel's Depression
PunkMichPhantom chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
This is really good. I understand this, since I'm into KH, too. It's really deep and I love the rhyme scheme. I'm terrible at rhyming, but I know a good poem when I see one. :) Do you like poetry a lot? If you do, you might want to try writing in a Shakespearean Sonnet format. I won't go into full detail if you don't wanna hear what that is. But really, great job on this poem! Feeling the angst, my friend. :)
MassacreAngel chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Awesome poem! Poor Axel... :D I grin widely at this.