|Reviews for Birthright|
| Ki-Chan Riker chapter 8 . 1/30
I like the idea and it started out very well... Even with the whole Jason Todd turned evil thing. But you have several things that make it not flow properly. 1) Batman does not kill... Jason Wayne in order to protect his father's name would never use a gun, even for show. Bruce would have had to drilled that into his head. And out of respect for his father, Damian would never allow it either. 2) you cannot train somebody to be this good and act like a hero in a week. It's impossible, six years maybe but that would represent you with skills on a similar level of the First Robin. Bruce might have given up the cowl but he wouldn't let Jason grow up with out knowing how to protect himself with skills of Robin or Batman level. Damian grew up being trained by assasins til he was 10, Jason Todd who only was taught the basic idea by them wouldn't have been able to get him that injuried. Those skills that Damian had ingrained into him from birth, they wouldn't go away. It's like riding a bike, once you learn you never forgett. I'm not tellling you this all to be mean or rude. I generally enjoyed your story a great deal, but I do want you to make it plausible and better. I hope your pen never grows dry and your imagination always runs for your story is brilliant on many levels. - KiChan
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
oooh. looks fun
| Jada Ryl chapter 8 . 3/6/2011
Oh, you gotta, gotta, gotta finish this! I really like what you've done with it so far. It's really awesome! I like Jason 2. Too bad Jason 1's decided to go completely rogue. I still wish Jason 2 could bring him back to the fold, but I guess that's a little too much to hope for. Please finish this!