Reviews for The Ghost In The Machine
Sarah7293 chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Aww that was really sweet and very good indeed :)
Novindalf chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Absolutely gorgeous; would have been a brilliant opening episode :P
theHuntgoeson chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
This is so beautifully written, phrase after phrase leaps out at the reader. The silence between them was apprehensive, as though the room was full of hydrogen and a third party held a match." Gene swallowed nervously, the air in his lungs turning to concrete" "He knew with startling clarity that when the bullet had torn her soft skin, it had torn his soul away from his body." "her gaze – making him feel more exposed than he already is- grows too burdensome." And there is a true sense of healing in their surrender to one another and the final kiss. If only we could have a scene like this in S3.
sash queen of the jungle chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
nice one shot...if only that was one of the opening scenes in series 3 we would all be so happy.
Fran16 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Stunning :)
sillygenie chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Ahh, lovely. Really enjoyed that little journey and the great descriptions along the way. Please have another like it ...
Eleantris chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Like all of your writing, beautiful! Really lovely description of emotion throughout and that kiss was just perfect! Loved it! But you have to write more, please!

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xXCoral-RoseXx chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
absolutely beautiful! love it x
Gem6 chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Aw thats lovely!

Gem x