Reviews for The Heart of The Family
queenofthelooneybin chapter 5 . 3/29/2010
Yay! I helped.

This chapter made me cry a little bit. Mostly cause I hate people who hurt kids and because I love Sweets.

Keep writing or I will find you.

Just kidding.

Maybe.
Rochelle Templer chapter 5 . 3/29/2010
I just wanted to mention that I noticed in my update that one of my reviewers keeps getting deleted in my shout-out in the author's note. I just wanted to say thank you to that person (initialed EEQSA) and no, I didn't forget about you. Thanks again for your reviews.
queenofthelooneybin chapter 4 . 3/28/2010
That was so cute! Aw. *falls over from cuteness attack*.

Just to let you know, just in case you ever want to include this, Sweets' real mom is a psyhic in some carniva down South. I just watched some episodes and that came up. Just a little tip from a fan.

*Hugs* Keep on writing.
cwgirlup chapter 4 . 3/28/2010
I love this! I've never read anything about Lance's adoptive parents. I can't wait to see how it goes :)
Fear Herself chapter 4 . 3/27/2010
Aw, that was so sweet!

Fantastic two chapters! Update soon!

~Fear
E.E94 chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
Oh My God, I almost cried! please carry on writing this.
queenofthelooneybin chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
Keep it up. Aw I love little Sweets. Am eagerly awaiting the next update.
Fear Herself chapter 2 . 3/25/2010
Very nice story! I hope to see an update soon!

~Fear
E.E94 chapter 2 . 3/25/2010
Wow, just wow!

I love your take on Sweets abuse, Ive always wondered about his adoptive parents, Keep it up! You really show his intelegance but still make him age appropriate, which isnt often done well, but you do. Please update soon, you rock!
queenofthelooneybin chapter 2 . 3/25/2010
Aw...I'd take Sweets, but I can see he's claimed. Keep it up.
queenofthelooneybin chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Aw poor Sweets. Any early childhood fics about him are awesome sauce. Keep it up!
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