Reviews for In a Tangle of Yellow and Black
ronelle chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
what happens next? who masaomi? it was good.
Aemeon Kafele chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Black and yellow not going together? Well, you must have seen my school then, cause your right, they suck together on all occasions, except this one of course.

This was actually pretty good. If you were to add onto it, then it would be even better.
wishIwereanime chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I wish you would have continued, it was just getting good! ;D
Beka Ca-Be chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
You should definatley continue to the smuttiness... because you have to write it to get better at it... that's how it went for me i got advice from friends and more experienced beta readers...and now i write the fairly competent Yaoi lemons that i do today However none are on this account yet...
CMHerrera chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
It doesn't suck, don't worry it was great.

You kind of left it off with a tease
Tsuki no kimi chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
OH CHRIST YES I NEED SMUT LIKE BURNING D:
MeLaNch0LYdreams chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
xDD I have a nagging feeling its Izaya and the scenario reminds me of the scene in sensitive pornograph which u can imagine...is a lot more graphic :p
SalomSoul chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
kyuuu i think you should definaitly try some lemony goodness although it is perfectly cute as is... lemmon would be even better!
IchiWaZen chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
First of all, I love you for writing Mikado/Kido. You deserve a ton of hugs for that.
Second of all, I love this story. I do have a feeling that Izaya is behind this though XD
Keep on writing!
skitty-nya chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Hm. Smells like Izaya is behind this. And is possibly recording the whole thing. What a perv.

Haha. Interesting fic, btw. Though I thought Kida would be on top. :P
Rautias chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
[Sorry, I'm not logged in but I really want to leave a comment for you : D]

So, yeah.. I absolutely loved it! You write very well, and even if I somehow would have wanted it to continue, you finished it in the right way.

Hope I'll see more writings from you about these two!
Citrus Sunscreen chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
omgosh! Mikado/Kida! *squeals* I feel so lucky today

*blushes* Thank-you for the mental image I love fluff and smut is just smexy, either way is good. Love this heaps. ]

Oh, and, I'm a huge Kida-kun fan xDD He's just SO adorable isn't he? *sighsigh*
Uphill Both Ways chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
I liked this,it was cute-Kida/Mikado needs more love 3

*No you are not the only Kida fan!