Reviews for Prove It
Anon chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Great narration.
amamour chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
I always pictured Lily making James wait until they were married. And this was good "smut" without it being like super trashy. I loved it.
jonski chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Very good. Wish im James.
tycaptaindinosaur chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
This was extremely well written. Loved it. *Favorited*

I have a small pet peeve, but thats just me. My brain apparently doesn't like it when 'boobs' are mentioned. Just saying, ignore me.

Seangel16 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
absolutely amazing! I loved the ending!
Amanda chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
wow - thanks for writing .
Multiple Sarcasms chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Right! I like the way, even though it is her first time, her confidence levels are high at the beginning, (i.e., she initiates it). Girl power! Very cute ;)

Best line: "He brushed his thumb over her lips. "That's what sex is. Lots of touching." "
bundleb chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
xXxDaughterofZeusxXx chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
favorite line: "He chuckled. 'What'd you do? Make toast?'"
TooManyHobbiesToList123 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is really...Amazing. No other words can explain it, I love it so much!
asterdarling chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Oh man. That's amazing!
ForeverWovenStars chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Holy crap that was awesome.
Superhero11 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
I really did like this story. I think what made it so special is that you managed to make is funny and sweet and hot at the same time. I find that when most people write an intimate scene they do not have those three all together, but you did. Very well written

Love Allison
ksdngkng'sfgnfg chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
That might have been one of the first I've read where they actually waited for marriage.

Hm, interesting.

"What'd you do? Make toast?"

Great job.
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