Reviews for Fighting the Instinct to Breathe
bjq chapter 1 . 1/28/2016
Choosing Sarah chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Great story. Too many people seem to dismiss Tony and Tim's relationship as something less than it is, but I think you've captured how powerful their connection is. Very cool.
tiffaroolou chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
I absolutely heart this story! Tony and Tim friendship FTW! Great job!
zoeee chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
hey, really great story! :)
Mokibobolink chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Awesome story! I love the echoes of Kate's death that Tony had as he was saving McGee. I also really liked how you described Tony's return to consciousness and the fact that the first thing he wanted to do was check on his Probie.

Great job!

Caos Accidentale chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Fantastic story! You capture the relationship between Tim & Tony excellently-as well as the relationships of Gibbs to his team. Loved it.

(One note: the formatting on the 2nd half appears to be a bit messed up; it's all in italics. Doesn't affect the story or my enjoyment of it one bit, but thought you might want to know!)
Gail Cregg chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
That was awesome! Sweet but not sappy,funny and perfectly in charcter. An amzing first ngrats on posting your first story and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Wingstar102 chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
I cried. Yes, it was that good and that... bittersweet, I think is the feeling I'm looking for. But yeah, better then fabulous. I don't think I've EVER written anything this good.

More please? Maybe with a little McNozzo?

Love and cherries,

Katiemoose chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
This was a really fabulous story. I can completely see Tony thinking like this and making sure that he saved his "Probie" Wonderful idea and great writing. Thank you for sharing it with us.
siltrana chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
awwn loved it
CSIGeekFan chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
I really enjoyed the story. I liked the humor mixed with friendship, mixed with trust. Well done.