Reviews for Alice in Wonderland 2: Back in Time
karina.spencer.775 chapter 4 . 9/23/2014
please write more
izumi12 chapter 4 . 9/19/2012
is that all?
izumi12 chapter 3 . 9/19/2012
i like!
loulouflowerpower chapter 4 . 11/7/2011
loved it
TheNewOtaku chapter 4 . 5/2/2011
good story, keep going
Aero01 chapter 4 . 5/1/2011
Hmm... nice story. But... A CLIFFHANGGER?

Word of advise: make the chapters longer. I enjoyed the story so far.
Infinite Stupidity chapter 3 . 11/24/2010
Wow. great start and i'm realy looking forward to your next update x
PhoenixWytch chapter 3 . 7/16/2010
Hm... Interesting.

Thanks for writing. I look forward to reading more.
hiyafolks chapter 3 . 6/1/2010
Thjax for the short... Er...est story there
hiyafolks chapter 2 . 6/1/2010
Thanx for the inturging story
Dead Men Tell N0 Tales chapter 3 . 5/16/2010

Keep writing!

xwedontneedroadsx chapter 3 . 4/20/2010
I know that this aletha is supposed to be nice and everything but I get the feeling that she ain't. Hurry alice! Save everyone! Especially the hatter! xD
warroirs fan chapter 3 . 4/7/2010
no... i will never review... wait a second

Jennieleeb649 chapter 3 . 4/4/2010
I'm really liking what you're doing so far. Interesting concept, nice characterization.

(I'm also jealous of your writing skills to be honest. ;))

Keep up the good work! D
BlueNewt113 chapter 3 . 4/3/2010
Per your request, I am reviewing. That was...short. I hope that you get a chance to update soon, because I really would like to see what comes next.

Also, a note on grammar and punctuation, because good readers should care (and notice) enough to point things like this out: Your dialogue and quotation punctuation could stand some improvement. I say that with all due love and respect for your work and for you as an artist. In case you are interested, I have included the link to Purdue University's Online Writing Center, which I find helpful in my own writing (fiction and academic).


I look forward to reading your next chapter!
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