Reviews for Waves
You know who I am chapter 23 . 7/13/2011
Thank you for ending the deer chapters. PLEASE don't write anymore.
You know who I am chapter 22 . 7/13/2011
Now she has emotional attachments to this deer? Can't you just combine all these chapters into one?
You know who I am chapter 21 . 7/13/2011
So now the deer has a name, so sweet. I think this should be the limit of deer chapters in a story.
You know who I am chapter 20 . 7/13/2011
So you finish the sentence, but you also say this will go on for a long time. I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!
You know who I am chapter 19 . 7/13/2011
Really? Really? No Really? At least finish the sentence!
You know who I am chapter 18 . 7/13/2011
THANK YOU for getting the deer to move. Such a breakthrough.
You know who I am chapter 17 . 7/13/2011
This has to be the most pointless chapter yet. PLEASE get the deer to do something.
You know who I am chapter 16 . 7/13/2011
Seriously?
You know who I am chapter 15 . 7/13/2011
Common get the deer to do something already!
You know who I am chapter 14 . 7/13/2011
Okay, even shorter, sort of pointless.
You know who I am chapter 13 . 7/13/2011
Very short, and still about the deer.
You know who I am chapter 12 . 7/13/2011
The deer seems very nice.
Renata chapter 28 . 12/12/2010
Hi Jewel! Well I think you should do it on Mai's point of view because she's the one who invited them and then later in the chapter switch to shawn's point of view to see what's going on between them. :D Hope it helps!

Btw Great job on writing :)
Guest chapter 28 . 7/24/2010
All povs ...but make the chapters more longer an romantic so it's. Makes it more interesting
SejiADettswic chapter 28 . 7/14/2010
when r they going 2 find out who's vamps and who's witch/wiz's?
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