|Reviews for MisAdventure|
| Hotrod198 chapter 2 . 4/1/2010
Nice chapter. I wonder who is going to get squirtle? Keep up da good work!
| Irondil chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
I do hope the next chapter is longer, and maybe you can do more than just thoughts and monolog (and dialog). A good story would also have discriptions. Not telling you how to write, but maybe you try writing an actuall story, not just thoughts and blurbs. Maybe thats what you ment by the next chapter being longer. but i anticipate the next chapter anyways.
| Hotrod198 chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
This is an interesting start to ur story. it seems team rocket are crueler than ever. Anyways keep up the good work!