Reviews for Talent Show
jmarrero16 chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Continue this please I want to know what he will do.
JackSam200 chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
hey, this is cool, but i've spotted a few mistakes.

If he's a general then carter is a colonel. soz

but its really good otherwise, i love it
elleelle chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
sounds like an interesting beginning