|Reviews for In the Quiet|
| Paper Pearls chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
This story was absolutely beautiful, and your writing style was wonderful - so graceful. The elegance of your prose was fitting, as it conveyed the innocence and child-like quality of the dolls perfectly:
"Echo laughs as she tugs on Sierra's hand. They run down the flower covered hill, Sierra struggling to keep up."
There was so much beauty in your language. I applaud your word choice, as the atmosphere was wonderful. Echo's innocence made her feelings for Sierra seem absolutely natural. I found myself wanting them to be together, and when the pair of them embraced, it was very sweet:
"Sierra sleeps in Echo's arms that night, and many more."
Quite rightly, there was none of the emotional depth or worries of an adult relationship. It seemed fitting that the pair of them didn't question anything about their relationship, and that they knew instinctively that it was right.
Well done for writing something so beautiful.
| Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
D well written, made me feel all fuzzy inside.
| FemaleSpock chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Aw, this is sweet! I like that Echo leaves her that message.