Reviews for Shark empress
vasting chapter 7 . 12/18/2013
why have to end :(
brandon chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
you need to check the spelling in chapter one

things are spelled right as far as I can tell but you used the wrong word lol

"and newly appointed captain of squad tree"
some how I don't think you ment the new tree squad lol and a few other times you made the same mistake just go thru and search for the word tree and you can fix it all fairly easy
mangetsu kuraiookami chapter 3 . 2/19/2013
Is the new espada #5 or #7? You used both
mangetsu kuraiookami chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
I'm sorry for being rude but your English grammar ducks. I suggest a beta reader
Thunder Tyrant 77 chapter 7 . 1/24/2013
I love this paring and the story! If you want an OC just ask I send you one!

Thunder Tyrant 77 out, PEACE!
Mal-Aki Ea Hecate chapter 7 . 9/3/2012
I'm looking forward to reading more of this!
batla chapter 7 . 2/20/2012
love the story cant wait for more
Shark Spartan chapter 7 . 10/15/2011
So far this story has a strong plot and the charterers are well represented. The added charterers makes the story more in dept and that is really good. I like where this story is going and i feel a build up to the relationship of the two which is a interesting choice to go. I enjoyed reading this story i hope to see more of it, keep up the good work
solitus chapter 7 . 10/11/2011
I really like this story)I'd definitely appreciate it if you guys could vote on my profiles poll as im looking to start my first story and it pertains to ichigoXarrancar pairing.
BleachBunneh chapter 7 . 9/3/2011
Can't wait for the next chapter! :3
LancelotQuanta chapter 7 . 8/30/2011
its been a looong time since i last read this story...
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
How did Aizen die? What were the events leading up to it? As it is, this fic seems incredibly badly thought out.

Reiatsu, not reatsu.

Vice Captain, or Lieutenant, not lieutant.

Hogyoku, not Hougyoky.

Three, not tree.
alchemists19 chapter 7 . 8/28/2011
Great story really like where it heading, it is well written and i cant wait for more. I like how the pairing is going and nothing is happening too fast. keep up the good work
KuroiTori-sama chapter 7 . 8/28/2011
Hey! I remember you! You're that person that last updated when I was but a wee boy! :p

Yea, funny stuff aside, this was an amazing chapter. I think it's incredible how much you've grown as an author over the (really, really!) long period of time you were away. That little stunt with the kidō was one of the funniest Bleach jokes I've ever seen on , and trust me, I've seen almost everything.

Update soon!


BTW: Even though it wasn't on purpose, the fact that you hadn't pushed their relationship further yet turned into a big plus - almost nobody likes to read about a rushed relationship.

d (_) b
hmm01meh chapter 6 . 7/6/2011
great story, though i noticed in this chapter that you refered to the third seat as a lieutenant, don't know if it is a mistake or if you upgraded her rank:p
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