This story was a bit cringy at times, rushed and didn't make sense. It seemed like a story excuse to write lemons. What was that crazy part about only having sex with 11 people by 21? That is a lot by any sense of the imagination. They live in a small community. I think all the girls in their "graduating class" only equalled 12 or 13 including Hermione. Of course he would be partnering with older or younger girls, but put into perspective that is like every available female in the country even close to his age! ALL of the not married or engaged females within several years of his age! I guess you took the idea of Veala and ran with it. That's fun, but you discounted everything about Fleur. That was sad. Some old guys and Hermione just decide that all the females in an entire race are now required to go to finishing school? What if they wanted to go to a school for wizards and witches like Hogwarts? Hermione and Draco both went there and did just fine! And why is Hermione now a blonde? Draco was always blond. This wasn't a sexual maturity 21 years old thing. Why would she do it? There were "dark veala" at the crazy meeting. Are they dark in coloring or dark in magic? Our heroines have zero relationship build up. A mutual crush at 16 and now at 21 they jump into a super fast relationship that is much more animal instinct vs human.

I meant to review at the end o every hapter but ended up turning the page. was 20 mins back to work after lunch and forgot to eat. what an amazing story. thank you. for making my day brighter.

So we never find out who the ocean man was and they don’t get even?

It just occurred to me how rude I've been! Once I found your stories, I've been cramming them in before the semester starts. Thank you so much for this story. I love how you portrayed everyone esp the rlsp b/t H the slytherins. All of their intelligence, appreciation of each other's skills and rlsps, etc. This was such an awesome story.

Maybe this is addressed later; but I don’t understand why any of the male Veela want her if she is not their mate? Ok she smells good, but she still isn’t their mate?

this story was super fun, although the ending was a bit rushed.

I loved your storytelling and thank you for sharing your gifts with others

I loved that you made clear that Draco liked her before the whole Veela awakening. Great job.

thank you for writing! 3

see? someone should've burnt the weasleys

burn the weasleeeeys

so no more waiting until the wedding? and the dude with the ritual doesn't suffer any consequences?

sure, give her more tasks

goodie

give them hell granger