|Reviews for I See You|
| ALLCYONE chapter 10 . 3/29
That was beautiful and amazing and mind-blowing and a whole bunch of other positive adjectives. I absolutely love this story and the relationship between Jim and Spock is so sweet. Thank you for writing this!
| Yingxs chapter 3 . 5/30/2014
A wonderful Story so far ,thank you :-)
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 10 . 8/10/2013
| CHiKa-RoXy chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
I have died and gone to heaven, that is the only explanation I have for the bliss I feel when reading this story. It was well-written and entertaining, I very much loved it. The story was absolutely wonderful from begging to end, so thank you for writing it. It is well thought out and the symbolism of the words "I See You" are wonderfully put in there. ..
| aaliyah1963 chapter 10 . 5/27/2012
Just stumbled on to this today. I loved Avitar and this story was awesome!
| Robyn Lee Swan chapter 10 . 3/14/2012
So I have a toothache now, but I really enjoyed this. My question though, is whereabouts in Montana were they? Cause it's a beautiful state. LOL Thanks for sharing this!
| PadmeSkywalker10 chapter 4 . 12/8/2011
Noooooo! Why is her running?
| PadmeSkywalker10 chapter 3 . 12/8/2011
The touching and the hugging! I loved this chapter.
| writerchick0214 chapter 10 . 9/15/2011
This was amazingly adorable and heartfelt. The emotions were captured so perfectly...I really felt as though I were there. I'm going to check out more of your stories!
| Doni chapter 10 . 5/19/2011
Just beautiful and perfect. You managed to combine my love for horses and my love for all that is Jim and Spock. Very nicely done.
| WickedBlue chapter 10 . 1/22/2011
Awe, what a wonderful fic. I think one of the scenes I liked most was the h/c massage scene, but the entire fic made me feel all warm and fuzzy. I love it. Thank you so much for writing it.
| SyntheticSonnet chapter 10 . 10/31/2010
Oh HELL YA to western romance!...i live in montana...that is my only excuse -_- lol nice job i loved it!
| EvalinaPhoenix chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Hallo Hitokiri! _
While I don't normally do an initial chapter review, I just have to say that I am, thus far, hooked on your story.
The back story into this new and exciting 'verse was very well introduced, flowing well between dialogue and narration without being awkward.
I also greatly enjoyed the fact that you actually USE proper grammatical structure in your story; dialogue breaks, proper punctuation, etc. For some reason, half of fan fiction these days is lol-speak pwp (porn w/o plot) and I find it quite vexing. I will admit that I have not read any of your previous stories, but I shall make it a point to now.
So, I positively *adore* the Native American tie-in, which makes a lot of sense given JTK's wild nature, and am looking forward to how this unfolds in context.
The repetitive Captain/Jim reminder holds true to character without being tedious, which is quite refreshing and the obvious reluctance is very amusing.
As for your concern that you have "trouble connecting" with Spock, as a GBH Fangirl (I'm sure you can figure out that means 'green-blooded hobgoblin') and a stickler for the basic Vulcan tones, I can assure you that personally, I find no fault with your portrayal. _
The only comments I could make are minor author quirks. Your voice is quite strong in the first few paragraphs as you kick the story into gear and then it slowly winds down into a more dreamy or retrospective voice a bit further in, with passive sentences becoming more and more frequent as Jim relaxes. Whether or not it was intentional, it works quite well for the story. Another thing I noticed, and believe me I do the same thing sometimes, is that you are a tiny bit semicolon happy. Neither are detrimental to the story or the "readability" of the story itself.
Sorry, I'm a former English tutor gone porn store clerk, so I get my grammar Nazi-fixes where I can: fan fic reviews. Also, I adore well-rounded critiques, so please don't take this as some weirdo providing a marshmallow-making flame or anything.
Anyway! I'll stop being a long-winded wench now and continue reading your delightful story.
| lametortoise chapter 10 . 9/5/2010
awh... that was a fantastic read... i love all the romance... and ur plot line was just absolutely solid and awesome... )
THANKS FOR WRITING! u're an amazing author... )
| aliengirlguy chapter 10 . 8/2/2010
great fic! good use of words and very touching.