Reviews for Your Son
ChaoticWriterCrazy chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Amazing. Just amazing. It fit the characters perfectly the story was great and intense. It really sucks you in and you just can't seem to stop until you reach the end. I especially liked the part where Hughes said that the champagne was poisoned. No matter how many times I've read it and I know how it's going to end I still can't help but feel that same sensation of numb panic that Mustang feels.

A very well done story!
aradian nights chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
So... Um... I can't really compose a coherent sentence at the moment because of the pure... I don't even know. The words have failed me. THE WORDS HAVE FAILED ME? O.O

I'd feel like a total jerk if I didn't review this amazing story though. I mean... *Whistles* Yeah, I'm going to praise you. Right now. Hold on I have to go find one of my old vocab books for this...

THIS IS FREAKING AMAZING! I mean I can not begin to describe how it made my 1:40 AM. O.O You rock. Seriously. I'm adding this to my favorites now. O.O
Fun-Sized Kirk chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
AH! It was so cute and amazing and well written! I love when I run into parental RoyEd storyies that are actually plausible and not just fluffy goop. Great job.
Tenkasen chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Ah, I really love reading well written stories on Parental!Roy/Ed. And this, this story was amazing. You did very well, I loved it. It wasn't some loosely thrown together event with no explanations, it was fantastically described, but not overally descriptive, and what events did happen were awesome.

-Tenka
SilverStella chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Kawaii!
Ceri Moriarty chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Aw…so cute! Sentimental/caring!Roy is adorable.
Cat-Tuong chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Long, but I loved it. I'm not adverse to Roy and Ed as a couple or anything like that, but Parental!RoyEd seems easier to imagine for me.

Great job, keep it up
xXx Fox Trot xXx chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
I love this. Absolutely love it. :] I really don't know what else to say. Just keep writing- you've got a great talent! :D And I love Parental!RoyEd... XD

Great job!
oakleaf chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Awwwwwwwwwwwww.

This is so good! I really like it.

I tend to fall for this kind of thing. :)

This is such a beautiful portrait of the relationship between Roy and Ed.
Rika24 chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I LOVED this fic! just wanted to let you know that I added it to my RoyEd recommendations list

royedff /
anonymous baka chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Awwwww that's so cute! Roy is awesome.

"That’s a stupid question, Havoc. I say it because it’s true. And when I’m Fuhrer there will be changes.

That day… all female officers will be required to wear… TINY MINISKIRTS!"

-Colonel Roy Mustang, the Flame Alchemist

(aka Captain Awesomeness)
Dreamweaver56 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
fantastic story! it kept me on my toes and it was also very endearing.
Ferien chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
This is honestly THE best oneshot I've ever read. (I don't normally like oneshots, but this one just caught my attention.) I had to reread this several times to get whole feel of it...and yes, I do have it printed it out.

Excellent work...everything was planned nicely and all the characters are very much in character. I like how you progressed the story slowly...how Roy was hesitant at first and how Ed and Roy almost "hate" one another.

Felt like I should leave a review, one because 40 reviews definitely looks much better than 39. And also, it was just purely awesome.

~Tenzo-kun
Ayla-tan chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
I liked that story Shows that in reality, Roy LIKES Ed and Ed LIKES Roy... like father and son..
porschepixie1901yahoo.com chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Iloved your story. This is undoubtedly the best parentalRoyEdstory I've ever read. You stayed very true tot eh characters and what their reactions would most likely be. Please write more.
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