|Reviews for Harry Potter & Loss Of Faith|
| LaverdaHarleyIndian chapter 36 . 2/25
Umm... you do remember that vampires don't sleep?
| Trance20666 chapter 1 . 2/21
you really don't like the Headmaster do you?
if he was forced by a vampire,
wouldn't he be afraid of them?
and i really hope Harry doesn't become all Marty Stu
i always saw him as a strong character
and if not get over what happened,
than adapt to it,
knowing he will not be able to change it.
when the summary says EC
so it won't be Jasper
what's the timeline?
which book is this based on?
after is Fourth year?
that's the only time the Dark lord got a hold of him
besides at the end of the Seventh book
and it still sounds like he's fighting him
| Spoon10488 chapter 16 . 1/25
And I'm done with this story... It's like you started a different plot in this chapter:
- Harry gets emancipation paper, but wait Sirius's will already stated he was emancipated.
- Then there is Ginny caring, loyal and loves Harry like a brother, but suddenly she has a change of heart and sells Harry out to Dumbledore after conveniently over hearing a conversation inside the Hospital wing either right before or after curfew (That is why Ron and Hermione left in chapter 14). Why was she there in the first place? It is not like it is visiting hours.
I was running low HP Twilight Crossovers and figured I'd give one of your fics another go, but now I remember why I avoid them.
I hope this changes in the future, because you seem to have plenty of decent ideas and the gusto to write, so there is potential. I don't know, maybe you just need a Beta reader or something. Oh well can't win them all.
| dolphinstarchild chapter 47 . 1/22
Loved the story. Wondering if you are writting or have written a sequel. If so, what is the title. If you haven't yet, please do as I'm sure there are others, as well as myself, who would be interested in finding out how things turn out, especially for Harry & Edward. Have read several of your other stories and love them. Please keep writing - it's a gift that I'm greatful that you share. Cheers, Peta
| horsesrules chapter 47 . 1/10
it was really good
| tamashiyuki chapter 47 . 12/20/2013
Muy bueno! !
Me gusto mucho!
| RellikZ chapter 47 . 12/19/2013
FINALLY someone who actually kills off the Volturi for that alone I freaking love u
| SakuraKoi chapter 42 . 12/6/2013
| SakuraKoi chapter 41 . 12/6/2013
oh no not Lily-Bell
| SakuraKoi chapter 40 . 12/6/2013
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| SakuraKoi chapter 37 . 12/6/2013
oh no Harry!
| SakuraKoi chapter 36 . 12/6/2013
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| SakuraKoi chapter 35 . 12/6/2013