Reviews for Mad as a Hatter
kajoo chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
excellent poem

I might steal it next time I have to write one in English

lol just kidding!
NOOOOOOOOOOOPE1 chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
beautifully written. you were able to portray a delightfully mad hatter. out of ten, i give you an eight and a half. its simple, wonderful, clever, crafty, and well... Mad!
Cactus-Caro chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
I like it, I really really do!

But I feel compelled to ask, did you follow Shakespeare's style? With iambic pentameters, I mean? And the last syllables ended the lines of his sonnets with the rhyme scheme a/b/a/b/c/d/c/d/e/f/e/f/g/g. This is what my english teacher taught in my class. I'm just pointing out that in your sonnet the rhymes of the last syllabes were different from Shakespeare's and such...

I'm sorry if it seemed rude, but it just pestered at me.

And like I said, I really like it, very very much, it was just the format that bothered me. (Sorry if I'm of any trouble ;.;)
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Hehe. Cool.
Tigeress-Jayde chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
he is mad because he was a scientist and he has mercury in his hat... thats what makes him mad... well according to one of the most annoyin girls in my year, she thinks she knows everything