|Reviews for Toast|
| Rarrgh chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Hey, I've been lurking around for some time now and so its probably time to stop lurking and start commenting and I think your story is a great place to start. I like the way both Spike and Dru are kept in character throughout and I love the idea. It seems like something they would do. The only thing I would change is the use of the word 'fanny'. I'm British (as Dru and Spike are meant to be) and over here it would be used as slang for vagina, making it a little bit jarring to read.
| MidnightBlack07 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
VERY nicely done!
You have a lovely, subtle way with words and you've captured the dynamic between Spike and Dru PERFECLTLY! :)
| a2zmom chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
ha! It's amazing those two lasted as long as they did.