Reviews for Forsaken
Sergeant Daniel chapter 6 . 12/28/2010
Your chapters are really good, I can't get enough of this story. Update soon:)
lilmiss chapter 7 . 12/5/2010
amazing! you really know how to write, and the story is perfect!
ghostie200011 chapter 7 . 11/28/2010
I really like your story so far. Great work!

BUT (you knew it was coming), at some points in chapter seven, its really hard to tell what is actually happening and what is memory. Perhaps if you italicized the memoirs, it might be easier to tell whats going on.

I really liked the cliff hanger, only I really don't get what is going on. Please explain what happened in that crypt-thingy. I really didn't understand what the heck was going on...
taraneme chapter 6 . 11/1/2010

Just wow! This is truly amazing. The apocalypse chapter was beautiful in its own way, and not repetive (if a teeny weeny bit long, took me 40 minutes to read and take it all in xD)

Cp6 made me laugh xD and the scene with Mewtwo and mew at the end is so... sweet... Made me feel all fuzzy inside it was so sweet Q.Q

""Hey, worm-bag! I found your porn collection, the ones you keep denying about! They're going to sleep with the fishes if you don't stop your stupid pyromaniac show!" He looked down at the horrified, rather perplexed stares, a few eyes twitching here and there. He slumped slightly. "Wha-at, telling a disturbing lie wasn't what you were expecting?"

"Deoxys, what the hell was that for?" Diagla exclaimed almost in a screeching roar, a poisonous leer in his eyes.

"That's low, Deoxys," Celebi scolded, shaking his head. "Very low."

"What do you mean it'll sleep with the fishes?" Kyogre then spoke up, penetrating a deadly glare in his direction. "Sounded like an intentional threat."

"Are you talking about human porn, or Pokémon porn, by the way?" Lugia blurted out his inquiry."

I have NEVER laughed that hard at a fanfictiong EVER! This is just epic XD

Hope you update soon!
Hotaru Hoshino chapter 6 . 10/11/2010
Yesh! Cloneshipping-ness!
Rae Logan chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
God... Damn! This is awesome! I seriously would have watched this thing over and over if this was part of the anime series. Seriously. I've skimmed over several Pokemon stories before, not quite finding one that hits just as great as this one, so I'm glad I looked at your profile after looking at "Hello".

I await the next chapter.
Dodectron chapter 5 . 9/7/2010
Oh man, no words can describe the awe I'm feeling at your work D I absolutely loved the way you described armageddon, and a great twist at the end of chapter 5. So lookig forward to the next bit!
shadowrabbit chapter 5 . 9/6/2010
I'm so excited about where this is going! This chapter was pretty explanatory I think, but I suppose you need to get all of this stuff out of the way before you can proceed. I'm looking forward to your next update, this story is really interesting!
Flamewulf chapter 5 . 9/6/2010
Wow! I didn't see that coming at all! Good chapter.
Hotaru-Hoshino chapter 4 . 8/23/2010
Whoah... Intense... is this where it ends? I can't tell... (p.s. Will the Unknown make an appearance?)
Flamewulf chapter 4 . 8/23/2010
Great story, keep it up! I'm curious what will happen next - will the earth be completely destroyed and what will the Legendaries do if it does and more importantly where and how would they live?
akatsukifan chapter 3 . 8/19/2010
wow. this is a pretty good story, i would love it if u updated soon. i have one question though, this story takes place in the future, does it not?
Nolongerinuse0000001 chapter 3 . 7/2/2010
AWESOMENESS!PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE!But please don't rush don't want you to pass out again!
Rabbid Writer chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
This is an amazing chapter!

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Dragonrager chapter 2 . 5/24/2010

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