|Reviews for Forsaken|
| Erik Joshua chapter 19 . 4/22/2014
All of the chapters are amazing and very well done I hope to see more of Forsaken soon.
I know how hard it is to write so im not trying to rush you, but I hope you will get the next one done soon.
| CinnimonToastKatie chapter 19 . 2/2/2014
*Goes to click to next chapter*
*There is no next chapter*
(Insert darth vadar voice above)
HOW COLD YOU FREAKING WRITE THIS GOOD OF S STORY AND THEN JUST ABANDON IT?! YOU...WHORE!(not really)
You better be dead to have no finished this. Really. You better be freaking DEAD.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Prodding due to excellence of writing.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
what Arceus said about the Tree of Beginning reminded me about the snake on a tree that Moses build that the people lost the true meaning of.
| nin-chanNINJI chapter 19 . 11/13/2013
*looks up with pleading eyes* You're... Going to finish this, right?
This story is beyond beautiful. It's just so well-written that I'm gonna cry. Amazing!
| Navarone Nocturne chapter 19 . 9/16/2013
Did you just end it there? Unfinished? BULLSHIT. As the previous anon said, if this book was published and sold I would buy it at any price. It's just that incredible. Please, don't give up on this book. I love it so much. ;_;
| Wat chapter 19 . 9/16/2013
Did you seriously just do that? Over 190,000 words and it just ends there? GET ON YOUR ASS AND START WRITING AGAIN. If they published a copy of this book, so long as it had an end, I would
| Thatguynobodylikes1 chapter 19 . 7/12/2013
Please update soon! :)
| Neofanatic chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
Words can't describe this chapter... it's amazing. I lost touch with actual reality for a moment as the imagery of the legendaries fighting for their regions took over my mind... and there's still more. I have a feeling I'll be reading this all night, even though I have school tomorrow. Keep up with the excellent work.
| anethmaman16 chapter 19 . 3/9/2013
Man, this story is so sad, but yet so good! I read for two days straight trying to finish it. Cant wait for next chapter, keep up good work
| Analyn Rockwand chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
What is mew's role anyway? I never realized it...
| Mystery Man Eusine II chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
"Piss off, I like to mutate!" - Deoxys
| Whozawhatcha chapter 19 . 6/5/2012
I worked through this story all day, ALL DAY only realize that it's not finished when I reach the last chapter! Oh you horrible!
...My eyes are dry and hurting from staring at the screen so long and my head is killing me but I keep telling myself that how epic this story is makes up for it (and it does)
Aslo, I'm such a perfectionist, I had to look up Myriam just to settle curiosity for curiosity's sake, variant of "Miriam" which was the original Hebrew of "Mary" and my mind went: DING-DING-DING! (unless that wasn't what you were going for)
ANYWAYS, excuse my digressing, I sincerely cannot wait for the next chapter and hopefully by then my eyes can focus properly as I'm blinking rapidly to see these letters XD
| Whozawhatcha chapter 16 . 6/5/2012
Holy mother effing jeez how much more can you put these people through? Erm, pokemon. And I was WONDERING where Ho-oh and the rest of them were! I was all like, "You're not here, you're not here, you're not here . . ." and the such.
GOD my eyes kill me and so does my head but I'm SO close to finishing . . .
| Whozawhatcha chapter 15 . 6/5/2012
OH. MY. GOD. That whipping scene was . . . awful.