Reviews for Incompetence
Triva chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Oh, reading this made my evening. Thank you, LuCarly, it's great to read a story that not only advocates equality, but is well-written and humorous to boot.
Kelisidina chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Hrm... In terms of description, I think something went wrong here; "short and messy", but Mikage's hair is not at all messy D:

"someone of great intelligence and cunning"...? Cunning what? D: Cunning wit? D:

"A women" should be "A woman"

I think Mikage was a bit too OOC here. I understand that she has matured since being a lowly secretary, but she hasn't really gained as much ferocity as that.


It was a lovely idea though and I can see that you had fun writing this piece about your favorite character! D

The ending was very sly and entertaining, it was an overall satisfying piece D
Misty Narumi chapter 1 . 3/26/2010

go Mikage! D
Ocean Starfly chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
HA, that was brilliant! XD Go Mikage!
Lotusnapper chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
It's very sweet, Mikage is such a strong character, and those idiots learned their lesson.
cykekik chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Tch Tch Tch... Bunch of perverts xd. I like this, though I'm not a Coastershipper...