Reviews for Emerald and Onyx
Guest chapter 2 . 11/22/2014
OMIGAWD they kissed omigod
GwevinForever25 chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
AHHHHH, I ACTUALLY SHRIEKED WHEN KEVIN AND GWEN KISSED! BEST FINALE EVER! GWEVIN FOREVER! They are perfect for each other 3 a bad boy and a good girl :)
Ladybug chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
I was so happy when they kissed too Solora. I was like OMG it's about time! BEST SHOW FINALE EVER! Gave me some moments to cheer about after I cried during Vendetta
Lady DestinyHope chapter 2 . 4/22/2012
AWW, this was the cutest thing ever. I really really REALLY love Daddy Kevin...please write more of him. Please please please! :) You did an amazing job and i hope you'll write more soon!
JustDanny chapter 2 . 1/22/2012
Love it!
MidnightGwevin XxX chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
just AMAZING! I loved it all the way through! This is definitely one of the best gwevin fanfics i have ever read!

I LOVE your work X

Mary Foster chapter 2 . 12/9/2011
love your story, you're a great writer but I hope you keep writing about kevin and gwen x3 devlin love how good it was one of the characters in your story n.n I imagine it must have felt when he heard kevin that his beloved was married and pregnant and happiness should not set exactly xD
elle markham chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
amaaaaazing storey
RoseAerin chapter 2 . 2/24/2011
THAT WAS AWESOME! :) :D the only part that bothered me was the kids were named Ben and JUlie but tht's just cus i would get their names confused AWESOME STORY! Although i recomend u finish a few of ur other stories cus i want to read them 2 and it's killing me they're not done see look Xp AND OH MY GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY KISSED! KNOW IT'S AN OLDER EPISODE BUT IT GETS ME EVERY TIME! :::::::::))))))))))))))
echotheinferno chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
mushy kevin is a little strange 2 read lol, but i like him none the less;). devlin is pretty darn adorable:). i like older kevin, he makes me laugh! and gwens gwen, insightful, i know. i mean she seems 2 me 2 be very in character, so awesome job!

though u know babies aren't sposed 2 be able 2 laugh or smile till their a couple of months old? of course in this they are so flippin cute that i wouldnt want them 2 change. who really cares bout what they can and cant do at what age, miracles happen! just thought i would point it out though, if it annoys u then just ignore it. if ur happy then who cares what other ppl think. this is a long and pointless review. i'll leave now.

so awesome story, i love it:).

clearblueskies chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
um... ever heard of modesty? :P but seriously, the story is amazing. :)
mednin chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
Love the fluffiness. I hope you make more fluffy fanfictions :)
ParamoreXO chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
Mind. Blown. That's all I can say...I'm just...mind blown. Wow, this is probably the greatest fanfic EVER!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS! I can tell you put so much effort into this, it's crazy! And it was well worth it because this is absolutely awesome! Wow, future Kevin is pretty edgy and awesome :) Pft, took Kevin long enough to figure out it was HIM all along! Gosh, he really is slow! It was so unbelievably awesome when Kevin was proving to his future self that he can heart was about to burst! I absolutely j'adored the ending, it was insanely cute!

Haha, and I know what you mean about the whole on-screen kiss deal. I was seriously happy...but maybe not as excited as you two! Anyways, great job! I'm definately favoriting this!
dragongoddess13 chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
ok first, love the story it was awesome and sweet

second i totally know what you mean, when they kissed in that final episode i was bouncing off the walls, my mom actually came up stairs cause she thought i was being attacked or
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 2 . 4/11/2010
I loved this fic very much. Sweet, short, to the point and totally realistic...well you know, Ben 10 realistic. Future Kevin was awesome.

Wonderful work. :D
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