Reviews for And The Walls Come Tumbling Down
foxinsocks92 chapter 23 . 3/15
So much cringe 3 poor deano!
Leighna07 chapter 23 . 1/17/2014
I love the story although painful especially after the salt and burn, sadly its not yet complete. Hope you can finish it. thanks for sharing :)
Marz1 chapter 9 . 11/12/2013
Angst! Good chapter!
Marz1 chapter 7 . 11/12/2013
Good thing he had just gone shopping! Great chapter.
Marz1 chapter 6 . 11/12/2013
Wow! The suspense! There's some horrible creature in the ruins isn't there?
Marz1 chapter 4 . 11/10/2013
Good chapter, the suspense is building. One little criticism, everyone gets a little british as the story proceeds.
Marz1 chapter 3 . 11/9/2013
A haunted air conditioner? I hope this won't require crawling in ducts.
Marz1 chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
I'm wondering what dean will do if a real mall cop problem turns up. "That girl is shoplifting. Get her!" Good chapter.
Marz1 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Good first chapter, though i'm a little confused about the time line and where the other winchesters are.
Shazza chapter 23 . 7/29/2013
Mary,
Please, please please let us know how this turns out. I hope not to be a pest, just a very enthusiastic fan!
Shazza chapter 5 . 7/29/2013
Oh Dean, never forget your phone! You don't have all your regular back up. I do like Pauline as a rather unusual sympathetic spirit .
Shazza chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
I really love the interaction between Bobby abd Dean, so realistic for the characters.
Please, may we have some more
Shazza chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Dear,
I read this story as it was written, and then was so sad when it was not completed. Please consider Dean and Pauline and all of your fans and continue on to finish this fic. Thanks
Dubhe666 chapter 23 . 4/13/2013
Wow, two years and you still haven't updated? I really do hope no one held their breath or they'll be dead! Although maybe their ghosts would then pester you into finishing this story.
I just 'finished' it and I really enjoyed reading it. Some great action and a good plot.

I hope you're still alive out there and that you were able to buy a new pc, so you can finish this story soon!
SilentHowler chapter 23 . 2/9/2013
I loved this, i'm currently reading another one of your fics and thought while you're writing the next chap i'll read this one and i'm so glad i did. It's amazing Deans pain of being left and then the anger at John and Sam were spot on. Bobby being the only one to notice his pain and then Dean fighting for Pauline and her justice, oh my heart, it was beautiful how you wrote her character. I really liked Pauline and glad she helped Dean when he was under the concrete. The scenes of Dean trapped had me crying in despair and then in joy when he was found. You're an amazing writer who filled me with so many emotions and i just loved this and i'm sorry i didn't review to each chap but thats only because i couldn't wait to see what happed next xxx
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