Reviews for When They Were
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
Hey, where's the rest of this one. Left up to our imaginations. Then I choose, they lived happily ever after.
Daddy's Little Pyro chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
This was sweet. I liked your summary, by the way. "A set of snapshots of what might have been." Really pulls you in. Anyway, I thought their interactions were cute, and the different events were interesting. They really did lead up to what could have been, but hadn't happened. Yet, I guess ;]
twibrarian88 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Thanks for recommending that I read this one-shot. I feel better about where the story is headed, although it looks like it'll take a lot of (mild) angst to get there. That's ok; I'm tough. I can take it!

But please tell me you're going to continue the story beyond the end of this one. Please?
FFpassion chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Brilliant, I love ALL your work.

Thank you for making this into a longer story, I'm really enjoying it.



Just4ALE chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Yay! Now I kind of know how the other one will end... I hope!

OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Boys are so clueless sometimes...haha. I liked it. In my mind he finally pulled his had out of his ass. :)~
shaz308 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Nice story. Maybe someone should have bought Edward a vowel!
Ironic Twist chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I've seen similar concepts before, but this was exceptionally well done. U do a great job on hitting significant milestones. Boys stink, sticking up for your friend only to have her turn on u, first kiss, jealousy, doing it, moving on, reconnecting, missing something u never had...
youngandmature chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
So... do they end up together?
SassyReaderGirl chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
This is a very nice story...its all about growing up.
ze1uh chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
This was beautiful...some parts got my heart to ache a bit, in a good way of course! :)
beegurl13 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Oh, this was beautiful! I love the angst of them being so close, yet so far from each other. Nice job, this was great. :)
angelrob chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Love it!
team-hybrid8 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Aw that was adorable!
Cecilia Siledubh Mohney chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
This was beautiful. You said just enough to move the story forward and in the end - while I wanted more - I didn't really need it to see what came next.
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