|Reviews for It All Started With a Birthday|
| Russian8once1psych7 chapter 18 . 6/9/2012
Loved this story!:)
| crazyladybazel chapter 18 . 2/6/2012
im so glad you finished it like u did it was perfect. loved all of the story, wish u would write more Hameron as ur good...but i won't complain if u don't.
| DayDreamer077 chapter 18 . 2/6/2012
this is pretty good epilogue. :)
| DayDreamer077 chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
the story is not bad but i get the feeling the chapters are more of one-shots since they are not all linked together. It makes it a bit confusing to following. hm!
| DayDreamer077 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
that's actually a very sweet gift. a cheap one but a sweet one.
| AllyCameron chapter 17 . 2/5/2012
Wonderful update! Thank you! I can relate to how you feel, even though I still love and miss H/Cam more than anything.
| crazyladybazel chapter 16 . 8/14/2011
I love this series! please carry it on.
Would love for you to do a chapter where there relationship finally comes out in the open, i know you touched on the subject in chapter7 or a chapter of when house first holds the child.
can't wait to read more!
| MLN chapter 16 . 7/28/2011
I hope you continue this. It would be interesting to see how he handles the pregnancy
| AllyCameron chapter 16 . 2/11/2011
Another great chapter! I enjoy this a lot!
| AllyCameron chapter 15 . 2/11/2011
Fantastic chapter, no need to be embarrassed or anything. Monster Trucks and House/Cameron will belong together forever :D
| Limaccia chapter 15 . 9/19/2010
Great, glad to hear you're going to be getting back into writing ff.
I've missed Nick & House together especially.
| guess who clue she loves ya chapter 15 . 9/17/2010
awwwww it was cute and made me smile, good job :) x x
| Limaccia chapter 14 . 6/13/2010
I liked House's analysis bit the best:
'Well, you're five days late, and your maximum is usually three, you've taken to not dabbing the fat off your pizza, and you enjoy 'mindless soaps' as you label them. Lastly, but possibly most importantly, your assets have grown.'
'Greg, they always do for this week! That why nature frustrates you so much.'
'if only that aspect stayed for longer... And I know they do normally, but not this much – trust me. Just do the damn test Ally.'
Only thing I didn't like was Cam saying she'd have an abortion to keep him. 1st, don't think she'd say that, & 2nd that sort of desperate bargain poisons a relationship.
But I also liked House's psych analysis:
it's a part of you, not just me. I think my attitude for you extends [to] it, and I may have finally learnt to share. But only 'cause it has half your genes. Anyone else is still banned. Even if this kids ends up disturbed and troubled, it'll be our disturbed and troubled ankle-biter.
| Limaccia chapter 13 . 6/13/2010
Yes, it was a little confusing at first, but I finally figured it out. Any when Ally came in, every bit was just so hysterical:
'Nicholas Timothy House, what on earth do you think you're doing?'
The young boy blinked a couple of times before pointing at his father.
'Well Ally, at a push I'd have said he was helping his crippled father diagn–'
'I should have guessed. Take the lab coat off, put down the clipboard and come with me – we'll go and get you some lunch while your father does his own job; I'll have words with him later.'
'But mum, I–'
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'Bring him back afterwards, it's not as though I'd let him misdiagnose anything.'
'Not that he would misdiagnose anything, I mean, how could he?, with us as parents. But someone has to sign the prescription sheets if they actually needed one, not that they're actually ill, but you know. And I, contrary to popular belief, do keep half an ear open where our spawn is concerned. And there's actually very little that Cuddles can really do – I have tenure.'
'Yes, but Nick doesn't. Nick isn't even qualified yet!'
'Yet. I will be one day.'
'Nick, sweetie, you're nearly 10, you have a long way to go at the moment.'
'But mum, I ace every exam we have at school, I could ace a few years above ones too, Polly down the road let me do hers for her.'
'Don't worry dad, she did pay me.'
'Ally, he has to learn business sometime, and he seems ready now...'
'Anyway, I reckon that I could go to university, get a degree and then come back, all before I was 25.'
'Knowing your father, yes, you probably could. I'll go in and chat to your teachers again – we don't want you suspended again because you were rude.'
'I'd done the work!'
'I'm not debating that Nick... That still doesn't change anything – you're coming with me. Greg, I'll see you later.'
'Nice try kiddo, maybe deflecting will work next time. Just make it less personal for yourself, and more personal for the other person yeah?'
| schrodingers cat 13 chapter 14 . 6/3/2010
If I focus just on the OOC-ness, funnily enough, I think that you captured House quite well. I can definitely see him buying the test and mulling the situation over on his own before talking to her. Only thing I'd say on this matter is that perhaps he jumped to a conclusion a bit too fast, 5 days isn't all that much and there could be other possible explanation. But then, he is extremely perceptive and you did give some valid reasons.
What bothered me was Cameron's reaction. I highly doubt that she would go through with an abortion, even if it meant losing him.
ankle-biter I like that phrase for some reason.