|Reviews for Reason for Rule 12|
| Sammie28 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I can't understand for the life of me why this FF doesn't have more reviews. It's brilliant. The three parts that particularly stood out to me:
- "in his heart, in his mind, he could feel the ghosts gathering, Shannon and Kelly ready to welcome another of his loves into the afterlife" (just because I could never describe this better than how it is)
- the ring he bought, shoved unceremoniously in the back
- the last paragraph.
I've read a lot of excellent "Twilight" FF, and they were excellent - depressed, angry and bitter, bittersweet, resigned - but this one strikes a tone that I hadn't yet read before. It's matter-of-fact and very raw in its pain; no embellishment. LOVED it. (I mean, I don't love that Gibbs is suffering and Kate's dead, but you know what I mean.)
| dg101 chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
| shawdoo chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Heart-wrenchingly sweet. I love how you described Gibbs' innermost feelings and fears. Beautiful job.
| SpecialBookworm-394 chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
That has to be the saddest story I have ever read. But it is still very well written. Thank you for showing me maybe why Gibbs invented Rule #12.