|Reviews for Optimal Capacity|
| MurasakiZetsubou chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This story was very good! So brave of you to write as EDI- you made her seem like an artificial intelligence and yet a feeling, sentient being at the same time. Just a bit sad that Garrus got bumped off /
| EmeraldsandAmethyst chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it with us.
| syned chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Brilliant and gorgeous and...
I sat at the end there, just absorbing. The structure and the use of EDI's perspective were genius. So much said with so few words. Breathtaking.
| WordTree chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Hardly words for this one. Beautiful and painful. Excellent.
If you're not writing original fiction somewhere Imma come kick your butt, you have talent that goes far beyond fiddling with other people's universes.
| Dr.Olga chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
I think I already reviewed this on deviantart, but I just re-read it, and the way you wrote this is just so freaking awesome. I felt like I was aching at the end. great work :)
| Shawna chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Woah hey there sorry about that thing I just posted I was feeling gushy there was no need for it I apologize anyway.
P.S. - ending with Garrus is always perfect, even if he's dead.
| Shawna chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Oh oh oh this is fantastic! Fantastic in a makes-me-want-to-jump-off-of-things-in-a-thunderstorm kind of way, but obviously you know what literature is so I needn't explain the emotion to you. I love the last, how do I call it, line?
Camera 23 [Tech Lab, live]: The professor puts down the holo and goes to work.
Camera 99 [Gunnery, live]: Silence."
This is exactly exactly it and it's great because you use the medium of the game to go and make this big statement thing but you've included all this lovely beautiful details and allusions and I love you so and therefore you are totally allowed to go off metaphoring. It's just great when someone writes a story based on a thing that's about more than just that thing. It's like the part where you get to go, see, see, fanfiction is occasionally legitimate! 3 3 3
Anyway very very wonderful I would not change a thing about it ever at all. Keep it up!
| Summergale chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
This story is fantastic, and the style is very well done. It's slightly uncomfortable to read (mostly because Garrus is dead, and he's my favourite character), but personal feelings aside this is a very good story.
EDI is also spot-on, and I like the touch where she can't speak unless spoken to.
| HumanTrampoline chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
I freaking loved this. EDI's point of view is done exceptionally well. "His expression says...says...she does not have this in her database." I realize I'm probably misquoting, since I'm going on memory, but that was by far my favorite bit. The brief camera glimpses were a stroke of genius. Haunting. Excellent piece.
| Dan chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Really liked this. Some minor grammar issues but other than that very good. Let me know if I got this right: Miranda, Garrus, Tali, and Samara didn't make it back. I'm not sure about Samara's survival, but I really enjoyed the style you portray EDI with.