Reviews for Malik Craynal: Book One
carismum chapter 5 . 10/30/2012
Another great read!
Azolean chapter 5 . 8/18/2008
Despite the numerous grammatical and spelling errors, I found this story rather enjoyable. It is lacking in detail in some areas, but there is still potential here.

Thank you for the time and effort you have put into this.
Miyth chapter 5 . 7/9/2006
Wow, that was interesting. There are some moments in this story that are a little hard to believe, but none-the-less you did a nice job. It's not easy to start and finish a story (believe me I know). I'm very impressed with you, I know these are some of your older stories but your potential really showed through them.
Shimagami chapter 5 . 6/6/2004
Yayness! I really love it.

Though it felt kind of rushed, or maybe it's just me. (And we all know I have issues)

But anyway, nice job!

daneil chapter 5 . 5/28/2003
well cmon then, bring on Book2. :) Layton Colt, I never get tired of reading your stories about me. Love them, love them.
Alison chapter 5 . 3/11/2002
Good story. I'm looking forward to a sequel.
Amelia chapter 5 . 3/3/2002
Nice happyish ending :)
ilee chapter 5 . 3/3/2002
Love it! You definitely have to write the sequel, but I agree...finish Host of Apophis first :)

Suggest you submit this one yo the other archives like Heliopolis and .
Amelia chapter 4 . 3/2/2002
Wow, suprise cliff hanger there. More daniel please ;)
pettygrew chapter 4 . 3/2/2002
Ack, that snake! Very good!
Margaret chapter 4 . 3/1/2002
Just read Ch.4. What a cliffhanger! Write more soon, please.
Renee chapter 2 . 2/11/2002
OH fantastic. Please continue soon!
Amelia chapter 2 . 2/11/2002
Good story
Iniysa chapter 1 . 2/4/2002
Oh please continue! :)