|Reviews for Bedtime Stories: The Beginning|
| Thescarredman chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
First, it's great to see you writing again. Second, your dialog and plot twists are first-rate, and kept me guessing. Looking forward to seeing further installments in this nice parallel-plot story.
| RJ Steamboat chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
oh wow! this is really good. more please? )
| just slummin chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Intriguing beginning to what I hope will be a long series of bedtime stories! It's always lovely to read your work! :)
| Alison M. DOBELL chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
I loved this. There aren't that many Mal/Kaylee stories out there and what really stood out for me was how you made it all come together in such a realistic and tender fashion. Hope you will be writing more stories.
- Ali D :~)
| Nicholson chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Oh, this was a great way to show Mal and Kaylee. I like the angle you took to tell the story, thou I would also love to see some 1st person accounts of how they got through that time. Good start!